Roses are red
Cati are prickly
My oh my
That escalated quickly

Holy shit man... awesome haha

WOW...that was the best "everything" I've ever read.

Hot damn. This fic just...whoooo! If you will excuse me, I will be in an ice bath.

I'm still impressed by this story! Even if it's quite fierce, (I began to read this kind of stories not long ago) I like it very much. And I prefer your way to narrate the things in detail.
Thank you for this very much! (And sorry for my bad english ;-))

-snicker- Spock's disdain towards the toys... marvelous. Love it. Beautiful xD

I just had a spockgasm...omg this was amazing!

HOT! HOT! HOT!

There is a lot of smut out there, but this certainly of a much higher caliber than all the rest. Good job, it felt like you managed to avoid cliches, as well as silly, snort-worthy words other people feel the need to write. You also managed to stay in character while writing this incredibly sexy story, and you provided a bit of a background as well without narrating it, both of which are impressive. The only thing I have to point out is that I'm not entirely sure about the purpose of the page break in the middle of your story. I could be that it signifies the complete blanking of Jim's thoughts, but I was also left wondering if it was a typo. Overall, very skillfully written!

So this is litterly my favorite fanfiction ever! Smut or not. This is just so well written, and I felt that it was very in character...even if they acted differently. I loved it!

Beautiful; an oasis of porn in a desert of site-restricted teases. XD

Thanks for that story ;b !

why must you write such things, these are bad for my heart

Very hot.

! *brainsplodey* !

This is INCREDIBLE! Hot enough to melt the brain and turn it into a pile of molten smut-induced mush! _ THANK you for sharing!