Oh my gosh... my family was staring at me while I was reading this becuase I kept laughing with this stupidly wide grin on my face! You painted the King and Queen perfectly! It seems the Queen's personality is turning into quite the fannon. This had just the right touch of humor and cuteness, yet you still get the twinge of sadness in the moment from the King and Queen. GAH. You are amazing!

That was incredibly sweet! The King and Queen were amazing, and I thought that it was funny that the King felt ashamed to be the same gender as Flynn. I've always liked the idea of those two being watched while they're on the boat, and I did one 'Waiting For The Lights', I hope you check it out.

Overall, a fabulous job. Here, have a well deserved cookie, and I'm going to go check out your other Tangled stories!

Awesome! :D Great idea, having the royal couple watch the romantic boat scene of our fabulous thief and lost princess, very original!

Awww 3 that's so cute, I loved what you did with their personalities!The King and Queen were such strong characters, they really it!

This is so beautiful! I love the king and queen. Good choices for names too.

awwwhhhh! I loved it! They're so adorable together! I love the part about him falling into the water and getting sick :D Good work

I like this story. It's interesting to read about the King and Queen seeing Rapunzel and Flynn in their boat during the festival. I liked their little comments on it, but I was a little sad that it had to end without Rapunzel and Flynn kissing (dang you Stabbingtons). Anyway it was a good story.

Oh my goshers, that was too cute for words. This is definitely going on my favorites list. Your way of writing is simply beautiful. I'm so jealous _

This was really excellent. It's something fun to think about.

Oh my gosh I loved this! Her parents are so creepy... They must have hawk eyes to see that far! Gosh. Loved this. It was fabulous. Just one question...

"Henric, I love you."What do you think?

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Was the "What do you think?" meant to be in the authors note? Haha I was slightly confused at that. Anyway, great job!

Oh, I was thinking about this too! I'm so glad that someone else is interested about what the King and the Queen said if they saw Rapunzel and Eugene on the boat... Awesome story!

This is insanely clever, beautiful, funny and sad at the same time.

that was beautiful. I LOVED IT.

i am so glad that i wanted to read this story. the fanfic is short but it twists you in knots. makes you feel vulnerable- in a good way. i like that. even though the queen and king didn't speak in the movie- it seemed like you characterized them perfectly. brilliant! please write more tangled fanfics! :)

Awwww, so cute!

Aww, this was perfect! I loved it! I think you misspelled scene (seen), but your writing is beautiful. I loved the king and queens bickering! And the king is hilarious.