A few issues. The Doctor’s universe does not have magic. It was explicitly removed from the universe, retroactively. Snape being able to read the Doctor’s mind is also quite a stretch. Time lords have been stated to inherently possess some of the best mental defenses, in addition, the Doctor has trained his own defenses to quite formidable on top of that. Even if magic would otherwise bypass psychic defenses, Time Lords inherently resist and weaken magic around them.

Wow! Just started watching Doctor Who, so I'm getting a chance to read all of those crossovers. This was so good! Really dark, but exactly as I'd think it would be. I stayed up until 4 reading this, so thank you, awesome read!

I love this

Kura: oh trust me, I wish I was with them so I can laugh out loud. Sadly I am in a class and smiling so much that my cheeks hurt.

Berry: ...oh...my...god...HIS LOVE INTEREST IS SNAPE!?

Kura: (shakes head) I so did not expect that. X3

Why in Minerva complaining about how evil Severus is to be sending big, strong sixth- and seventh-years into the Forbidden Forest at night with Hagrid for a detention? It's exactly the same detention Minerva herself gave to four little first-years back in Book One. And there isn't even a unicorn-killer wandering around the Forest now.

Oh, that's right, I forgot: I.O.I.A.G.D.I. (It's Okay If A Gryffindor Does It). This will even apply to Crucio by the time Harry arrives back at Hogwarts and needs to punish someone for the horrible crime of spitting on his favorite teacher.

Yay! It's nice seeing McG and Snap getting along.

Hmmmmm. I wonder where Sirius Black is now...

XD he helped Ron so much but Ron has noooooo idea. Meheheheheh...

Shrimp cakes. Wow. It's really cool to see what might have been going on while harry and co were galavanting around the sunny English countryside on their little horcrux hunt.

I know why filtch likes straight hair ;)

I thought Neville would just kill him right there. After all, Crouch jr was one of the deatheaters that tortured neville's parents to insanity.

Half his salary? Does he even get paid?

:O snape.
Snape.
SNAPE.
Omfg that just made it into my top 10 list of creepy pairings.

Phew. They got their memories back. Did I mention how creepy that was?

I just can't get over how creepy those personality changes are... I wonder if they will retain their personalities throughout... Time to find out. Onward!