take your time,this is one of the best rdr stories out there, so take your time and work on it:)

I have crippling depression because this won't be continued

I said it once I'll say it again... AMAZING!

This was absolutely amazing!

one of the most readable and enjoyable red dead fanfics. I think its got quite some potential especially with how well you write Jack and John. Sad it seems to have been abandoned, but it satisfies with the interaction between father and son. Could label it a one-shot and I suppose I could roll with it rather well.

Have you no shame? Leaving a story like this for 2 years?

i would like to see ALL horses of the apocalypse with jack on the unicorn. i want to see edgar ross, abagail marston,the undead marston daughter and maybe elderly but still cool, RED HARLOW...

i want to see a way to turn john human again and i want edgar ross recieving is, wait for it, REDEMPTION for killing john by killing the undead as jack,undead john, and edgar escape the cave. edgar will die a hero by shooting until he is struck down by a bolter mummy. every bullet he fires will repesent how many bullets went into john like 1. he hits john in the stomach kills undead with a bullet to the stomach. 2. hits john in the right shoulder kills undead in the right shoulder but 3. john is killed edgar is killed but does not turn undead. he is dead. i want john to live and not turn into an undead. can you believe all this info for you is being created by an 11 year old boy who plays gta, rdr, and rdr un?

u at least three main characters from RDR how about some of Dutch's gnag and Bonnie Macfarlane

zombie john should find war and help jack break it

nxt make john shoot a zombie in a graveyard with jack then they run into 'the cupacabra'

I hope you update again!

Nice story. I love Undead John!

This is really good so far, however, on chapter 2 there is a swear word. The rating says its a K, so maybe you should change it to either a K or a T. But still, this is a great story and I cant wait to see more of this story. Keep up the good work;)

-ashsmashing

YES! BRING ON WAR,PESTILENCE,FAMINE,UNICORN, AND MAYBE A CHUACABRA OR 2!

I'd love to see some apocalyptic horses. I was actually looking for a story like that and happened to find this one. I'm very eager to see it continued.