nice

It was okay...I liked it...I wish it was more of a story...and I wish Zack wasn't dead...that takes the ZACK out of Zack X Cissnei.

awww :( this story is saddening. short but straight to the point.

Lovely. I thought the way Cissnei doesn't name Tseng, or any of the other Turks, is really effective. It emphasises what must be the loneliness at the heart of being a Turk.

That was lovely. In fact, one of the more convincing takes on Cissnei that I've read. I love the idea of her not actually knowing her real name; of never having the chance to be somebody she wanted to be. Beautiful understated prose.

Also I love your username, raisedonradio.