This is GORGEOUS! I'm getting ready to be Mary Magdalene in a passion play, so I've been thinking about her a lot and researching her, which is why I just searched for her on this website. Your characterization of her is awesome. I loved how you envision her exorcism/conversion, and how Jesus waited for her and welcomed her when everyone else was afraid of her. Some mechanics could be cleaned up, but the language and story are beautiful.

excellent writing.

This was so beautifully written! It made me smile..Great job! Your writing is so perfect..Truly God has blessed you with a gift. Wonderful job! So beautiful!

HE IS RISEN INDEED!

So beautiful! Especially the parts where the flowers (Easter lilies, I assume?) sprang up everywhere around Him! Beautifully, vividly written-you're so skillful at placing the reader right in the moment! Brilliant work, dear. Happy Easter. :)