That was really well done. Nice job showing such emotion in so few words.

Excellent work! This was wonderfully done You should feel proud of yourself for writing it! I'm very impressed! I loved the fact that you switched POV's between Hermione and Bella. I also love your word use and the the flow. Great job!

-Ali

P.S Keep an eye out for my PM, I will be sending them out to all contestants shortly (:

Very haunting, Bellatrix is such a terrifying force...

Loved it,

~Trix

Interesting Very Interesting! So is this a one-shot?