Reviews for Redemption
sandy45namaste chapter 5 . 8/29/2015
hope story isn't done.
jdgatorbait chapter 5 . 4/4/2014
Please you have got to finish this story. I really want to read the rest of it, you've got me hooked, I've got to know how the men at the station and the folks at Rampart are going to help Johnny.
Gage Girl chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Please update soon some of enjoy your stories very much and can't wait to see how they will end up!
Daze chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
I liked this story and especially the ending because it leaves the reader wanting to read something more. Nice going giving Marco a gal too-that boy was always alone (LOL)! Thank you for writing I hope this encourages you to write some more.
TheNaggingCube chapter 5 . 3/11/2012
No, no no no! 1) Johnny can't bring that crazy woman back into his life. She is just wrong for him, especially since she is only in his mind.

2) It has been almost a year, any chance you'll return to this story?
jada951 chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
poor confused Johnny. I do remember reading the first story, and I recall reading the second now. It's too bad he cant' talk to anybody! Looks like he's on his way to the locked wards if he cant' get it together!
jada951 chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
oh man. johnny is really screwed up this time.

I'm hoping at least dixie will see and figure it out...

hope you can update soon.

:)
AJWSPJS1 chapter 5 . 6/22/2011
Excellent. Creepy. I'm enjoying this story.
jerseybelle chapter 5 . 6/21/2011
Oh, boy, Johhny's in trouble. Good chapter.
fanofrandy chapter 5 . 6/21/2011
Oooh...you got me going. Not really liking the "mean Marco" or "psycho Johnny", but the characters fit the story line and it is intriguing to see the development.

Hope everyone is back to "51 Normal" soon :-)

keep it coming...
fanofrandy chapter 4 . 6/13/2011
Great story arc-Gage's "phychosis"...lack of sleep can certainly cause great paranoia and poor nutrition can cause mental issues as well.

Hope he can get his "redemption" figured out before it takes him out!

Looking forward to more...
Neemps chapter 4 . 6/12/2011
Looks like Johnny is anorexic, being so upset after a tramatic experience and then not eating much over a long period of time. He's already so skinny. I hope Roy can get through to him soon.
Ginger S chapter 4 . 6/9/2011
Poor confused Johnny. Someone needs to see what he's doing to himself and help him. Surely he's losing weight. They have to notice. More please... :O)
Maudlin Mush chapter 4 . 6/8/2011
poor Johnny. Trying soo hard and yet they find him. If only Roy hadn't been such an ass. He's atoned for things he didn't have to atone to! Thank you for the update.
helpmehelpu101 chapter 3 . 6/2/2011
Loved the 1st story and already liking the sequal. Plz ubdate soon cuz I'm curious as to whts up with johnny!
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