sweet :)

I think your writing is really good and I liked that Arthur came to the rescue ;) I think you could've had more teasing from the knights if you wanted to have some humour, maybe in the end to end it a bit more humouristic ;)

And all the knights coughed, shuffled their feet and mysteriously vanished from the campsite. Lol.

Amazing! It was amazing! And so hot and sweet! 3

So sweet (with just the right mix of angst and smut)!

Loved it! Merthur AND Merlin Whump! Worried out his mind Arthur!
Delicious story!

It's just so sweet, a wonderful birthday's present.

I think there should be Arthurs point of view as well this story but in his point of view.

God, can you imagine what the knights must have been thinking? They would have been right outside the tent! lol. But they probably knew for a long enough time anyway.

...Just think of the knights sitting around their camp and going, "Oh god I wish we had earplugs or something." Merlin and Arthur weren't exactly quiet now were they?

Totally and completely hot! I was thinking though for most of the sex scene that Merlin must have been extremely dirty and erm, smelly, especially down there, after a week in some rotting dungeon. Would have been nice to see some element of that mentioned, to infuse just a tad bit more gruesome reality into it. But overall I absolutely loved this story... The characterizations were spot on, everything flowed so well, just gorgeous! I envy your writing abilities!

Finally. They are so good together in this story. So loving and caring and protective of each other...thx...gr

Sweet and hot, ah, a perfect read before going to school! Thank you. :)

this was actually so amazing . you wrote them perfectly, i could totally see them doing this ;) heh heh

this was actually so amazing . you wrote them perfectly, i could totally see them doing this ;) heh heh