Reviews for Split Point
TheOneThatGotAway99 chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
I don't know why this hit me so hard. One minute I am laughing and enjoying the family bonding moment, then I got to "That feels like forever ago." and after reading that paragraph I had a hand to my mouth. By the last sentence I was bawling harder than I have in ages. Maybe it is the uncertainty, but it seemed to hit me harder than it should have. I am still supressing sobs and wiping tears away.
My poor Leo. What has happened? Where have his brothers gone? Gone so long, but he still waits for them. All of them.

'I'm still here.'

Beautiful work. Excuse me, I can't see to type any more.
-TheOne
D'Fuentes chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
How awfully funny! Ha ha. Not to mention sad, but geez! Raphael's the nut, not Mikey and his ugly shorts. So the teen couldn't go in the sand if he's buried? *laughing* I'm already in my bed and covered up with the lights off, but my phone was just too quiet. I HAD to pick it up! I'm glad I did. L8erz!
Mikell chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
The ending is so sad! Where have his brothers gone? But I feel it in every fiber of my being, as I think anyone who has lost a loved one does.

Love the shorts. That's so typically Mikey, and so funny.

-Mary
Do a Barrel Roll chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Nice. Went from cheery to lonely and wistful.
AlexHamato chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Aw... this was a very nice one shot. I loved it. ;)
German girl chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Hi. Nice, the completely opposing pictures/scene you made me imagines. Full lively beach and the guys joking and then such a lonely scene. Sad. It made me want to ask: what exactly happened. And what time does the end scene Play in? 2100 sth?