Are you homosexual by any chance no offence cause this actually disgust me

well since you asked that sex seemed really dubious, isn't it rape? I don't think that should be called sex since generally people associate sex in Romance novels/books/fanfics, etc.. as in "making love" soooo ya uhm GL?

Loved it!

this was hot and i wish you continued with this story, it's amazing!

I like it when the sex scene is long and detailed... Very detailed :3

I think you should have showed some deeper bond between them before they had sex, like Ichigo finding Grimmjow jokes funny but since he is unable to say it and so continues to act like a teacher.
Because... would you normally sleep with a student(!) whom you don't even like because you think that he is making your life hell and hates you...?
You should seriously use LUBE. That stuff is needed. Seriously.
The lemon wasn't very realistic (The way they had sex, Ichigo's asshole would have ripped- and yeah, that's no fun. Like, at all.) but it was ok for your first time.

Did you come up with the teacher rhyme? I like it. Cute, yet very dirty.

This was good an not amateurish at all :)

A-MAZ-ING! :D

I read your story!xD (because i'm on my iphone i cant log into my ff account) now read mine! wobsie: search it!

3 Amanda

Ps. I liked it! Good smut and I liked the pacing!

Ya got me hooked on that song now.

I love this story but I loved your poems just a tad bit more! XD

If I ever get another English poem assignment, I'll be sure to use yours as a reference! XDDDD

That was hot, don't give up writing :)

-AnT

i love it.

Woah! I'm glad this is my first GrimmjowxIchigo fanfic..

Damn that was Hot! It was well done. Made me go into heat myself haha!

Btw, thanks for telling the songs name.. Damn that's one vulgar song... I'm gonna keep listening to it and imagining this fanfic in my head..

My favourite part: 'Suck it' Oooh Yeah!

*nosebleed*