God, I just love how possessive Shawn gets ...'my detective'!

Love this story. You capture the humor from the show wonderfully.

I hope we find out what is up with Shawn's scar in the first story. I'm rather curious. As always great chapter!

Love this.

Yes, Lassie, Shawn's detective skills be hot stuff. Thanks for not making Lassie and Shawn's date actually sorta work out. Once I find a couple I like I stick to them and I'm a shipprude where I only read one ship at a time.

Aww :3 That was the perfect ending to a wonderful story! I really liked Keith, by the way. Though Lassie made me very angry and Shawn too. Why does anyone ever think that making the person they're interest in jealous is ever a good plan? It always ends horribly. Like Lassiter getting shot, that was horrible and wouldn't have likely happened if he hadn't gone out with Keith. Of course, Shawn shooting Claire was an awesome touch though XD And the Gus/Juliet relationship was perfect... And their first actual date as a couple, with Shawn and Lassiter being all defensive and competitive was hilarious :) Seriously, this story was perfection! I loved it!

Love it ! It's so funny and your Lessie oh just great :D

This is a great sequel to your previous story. When I read your previous story I had thought they would remain like that. No catching up, no talking about it, just a one time thing and it's over; just a memory. But I'm glad that's not the case.

I read this story while listening to Jordin Spark's Battlefield and I got to say it adds spice to the some scenes that I thought were sad. The song suits this story.

Hope you continue to write more in the future! :D

Ahh, the old jealousy trick. I really liked Keith, though he was fairly perfect and actually seemed like a better person to go out with... but his inability to tell Claire was dangerous indicates something pretty clearly.

I liked the ending, it was very sweet. What, with the Dream Police and the magazines and the domesticity. :]

fantastically played out! and you have the best titles

Not only was this adorable, it fit really well with the writing style of the show. Five stars!

First off...I love you for the Thing referrence. 'Tis my favorite horror movie! Secondly...I will never be able to look at Cap't Hook the same again. -headdesk- And finally...this was awesome! Like all of your stories, I loved it so very much!

I have to agree with Peanut Gallery. It's great to know that some authors actually do their research first. Impressive storytelling as always. I read the entire fanfic at work and wasted a good chuck of the day. You're wonderful like that, haha.

This has amazing imagery, lust, and emotion. I think this fic deserves a LOT more reviews than it has. I couldn't read chapter 5 at my school and because I had just read chapter 4, I've been thinking about what would happen ALL DAY. That's how addicting this is. I was never a fan of Shassie until I read your stories.

Please update soon!

This is fantastic. U r the best! Please please continue this !