heeey hun!
I don't know if you still read the reviews on here but I figured that I'd leave one anyway because this was just too good of a story not to!

so first things first, I had this 'thirst' to read some good old fashioned zailey fanfics that when I stumbled upon your story, it felt like I hit gold! the summary drew me in and the concept of it was so intriguing, I just HAD to read this; no doubt about it lmao.
then by chapter 3 or 4, I actually figured out that the killer was Maya because the bitch wasn't exactly subtle, lololz. it was like all the things she was saying sounded too rehearsed or she just knew what to say (to the point where she pulled out the theatrics and cries about it and gets upset with Zack when he doesn't pay enough attention to her) that I literally went, '"oh fuck. oh my fucking god. I've read and seen too much detective/horror stuff to know that she's the one. I know she's the killer!" I just needed you to confirm that it was her because I wanted to be sure and I've been wrong before so there's that

don't get me wrong, the way you wrote her and the foreshadowing you did was genius and if you aren't totally invested to actually solving the case as you read along with this, you'd totally miss it. I was reading in between the lines and focusing on the tinest details that any person who can get me this hooked and interested is very talented so kudos to you :)

also... by far, I think my favorite character had to either be Splinter or that Cameron guy. I know that his name isn't Cameron but I forgot his name and I'm on mobile so I'm kind of nervous to lose everything I typed once I backspace, sorry please bear with me x they just added that comic relief to all the drama that was happening ahahaha.

but yeah, I actually knew it was Maya and I was still shocked af when you revealed it was her. I was like, ":OOOO WUUUUUUT!?" and the way she forced Gemma to swallow those pills, dear Lord; I was so angry! what kind of friend does that!? ugh, don't befriend someone like Maya in this story lmao.

I loved the way you ended it by the way! it was realistic which also left it bittersweet, something that aches my heart but in a good way because sometimes we just don't end up with someone that makes you feel like the happiest person on earth. sometimes the best thing to do for the one you love is try to move on from them or let them go to be happy. it's always a tough decision to do so but you executed it so well and perfectly! just, omg. I'm so in love with this, I'm sad I didn't read this during the time it came out :( dang. I wish I could write something like this but no matter, I still enjoyed this none the less :)

I'm sorry if my review is all over the place but no words in my head can describe how much I love this, it's something I can never forget about! also, feeling like a detective is so fun lol. maybe I should work in the fbi? lololol, joking. joking.
I'll get out of your hair now but if you should take anything out of this review, I hope you never (and will never) stop writing because you just have the chops and talent for it! this could be your own published book if you wanted it to lol.

but yeah, love love love and I hope you have a great day hun

I blew through this in one night. Well, that's not true. I started around 11:30 PM and finished at 2:11 AM. I really like Zailey, even though there wasn't much present here. I am a little disappointed by the shortage of Zailey fics, and as far as i know, Save Our Sunny hasn't been updated since everyone's parents met in a cave or some shit. By the way, how in the hell can Zack have sex with Bailey if she's a ghost?

Your story was very interesting and captivating. It was fun to try to be the detective but every other reveiwer probably didnt really get it. I guessed Maya but I didnt really look into it. I didnt actually go all detective on this story but once I finished it I know I breathe knowing the ending. I also am inspired to play the game of assasin. The game not the whole murdering anyone who has any association to my boyfriend. Im glad this is just a fanfiction thoigh because in the real show I love Maya. Im amazed at how you could make each murder yet always give a clue to who the killer was.I agree that a ghost human relationship just wouldnt work out. How did you plan out this whole mystery story and make everything connect in the last chapter? I hope you read a lot of mystery sherlock holmes and nancy drew kind of stuff or else this is a little creepy. So how old are you? You said you had to mature a bit to finish this luckt with your future writings.

interesting...

Ha,i knew it was but anyway cool except 4 the zailey parts

Ooooh! We're getting closer to the killer. I wonder where Splinter got the wine... maybe he was tricked! Dun dun dun, maybe the killer is trying to frame people now because they're getting too close... *is over analyzing everything*

Yes I am really enjoying it will there be more of the story I am dying to know who the murder is and stuff.

Nice story,dude

Nooo! Bailey! Poor girl...

it's great to see regular updates .

Ghost indeed! I was not expecting that. Aww Zack is falling for Bailey, how sweet.

Oh it's getting interesting. Good to see you're back

This is really awesome! i really wanna find out who wins- Bailey or Zach! yuu gottaa UPDATE fast! pleasee && thank yuu

NAME Amanda Smart

Code name: mathfreak

gender: female

charasteristics: straigt black hair (short). glasses

skin: dosnt matter

thats the end?T_T :come on keep writing ...

cool