1.) Shisui 2.) Itachi 3.) Minato 4.) Suigetsu 5.) Tobirama

Nani de gasa?

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I really like the pacing of the story so far but now that there is more of a clear plot things are slowing down. For example, each kidnap situation resolved within a few chapters. I'm not a fan of long drawn out fight scenes (honestly I just gaze over them to read dialogue) I guess I'm more interested in character development and that is what makes me enjoy this fiction so much. The characters don't have a unrealistic love at first sight. I do admit I would enjoy Dessie and Hidan to go ahead and get together.

Hidan is my favorite character. The Akatsuki didn't get enough screen time :(. I like that you do not focus on the main characters. I love the Naruto universe. But I hate Naruto. I'm pretty sure that Kakashi is the only reason I continued on with the original series, believe it, that's my ninja way, you know?

I wish Dessie narrated the entire time. She is by far the better of the three. Kate is only bearable because of Mr. Nibbles. It is hard to get a good idea of Hannah's personality really is because she is almost a perfect balance between Dessie and Kate.

This is a terribly long review, I apologize.

In order of my liking most to least: (Based on canon appearance in the series)
1) Hidan
2) Itachi
3) Kisame
4) Pein (Nagato in Yahiko form) / Konan
5) Tobi
6) Deidara
7) Hate pretty equally: Kakuzu, Zetsu
8) Getting hit hard on my 'funny' bone
9) Orochimaru
10) stubbing my toes
11) watching two girls one cup
12) Sasori

Hannah is my fave followed by dessie. I don't like Kate as much but she helps introduce a lot of hilarious bits into the story.

I name my cars too right now I have shinju (pearl) a little silver sports car

the personalities are a little extreme, but it's fun.

That story was AMAZING!

I’m sorry Author, but Hidan was never my favourite person. But in your writing, he’s the best person in the whole freaking world.

I read this ages ago and just came back to it. it's still amazing

i hate this fanfic so much. its so crappy. why cant i stop reading?!

I hope you don't die in a extremely painful death in the future. (Near or not,)

Holy moly this fanfic is probably the best one I've read so far that's based around the Akatsuki. It seems to have an ending, and so far, I haven't seen a single character be OOC yet. Thanks for making it :D

Omg Dessie you left your cars on someone else’s property unlocked! They’re gunna die!

u suck at french too! just remember 'f' stands for fantastic despite what they say.