Reviews for Invisible
BoredKing chapter 3 . 4/11/2019
Ayame is really cute in this but Naruto is so much of an airhead it kinda ruins it for me.
Germzy chapter 3 . 12/15/2017
very good. loved the story
Guest chapter 3 . 6/27/2017
I loved it that was the best last line you could have used even though it's only 3 chapters it realty felt like a longer story in a good way
Kyakou chapter 2 . 3/28/2017
No, just no. People review when they want to! At least you got some favorites and follows! Be thankful bruh, for shame, for shame. I don't even want to read this fanfic anymore.
xNaruHina chapter 1 . 2/27/2017
Such a big deal about not pouring the broth in one bowl... If a customer wants their food prepared a certain way than that is how it should be prepared...
zombienaut chapter 3 . 1/4/2017
more plx
Guest chapter 3 . 12/31/2016
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LordVanity chapter 3 . 8/27/2016
Update this shit you mother fucker.
yindragonkiba chapter 3 . 8/21/2016
awwwe
Fox Sage Kinoe chapter 3 . 7/30/2016
I really didn't think that there would so satisfying ending
LightningFireZC chapter 3 . 1/11/2016
WE WANT MORE, WE WANT MORE
Say it with me
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I WANT MORE, I WANT MORE
Guest chapter 3 . 4/11/2015
awesome! best pairing in the narutoverse! it's a shame it is not a canon
RamblingMadness chapter 3 . 1/16/2015
I really liked this cute little story, it's sweet and nice. I think their characterization was well done as well.

Good job :)
Guest chapter 3 . 12/6/2014
This was adorable! Your characters are very compelling and well written. I'm glad you finished this story, and you left it at a great place :)
DraxAQN chapter 3 . 8/18/2014
There a good couple.
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