Ahhhhhh this was so sweet and sad.

Beautiful

Ah...I love this point of view, and the fact that Edward knows and agrees with what you're thinking makes me smile. You expressed the feelings of nearly every person who ships them, great job.

This is really good amd is enjoyable to read

Really great. Very heart-warming and thoughtful story. I truly liked it.

*throws self on the floor and sobs* why must you do this to me? PLEASE TELL ME YOU'RE GOING TO WRITE MORE FOR THIS SHIP!

This deserves many many more reviews! You should update and make it multichap so they eventually get together? Oh please oh please?

Oh, I like this! So sad, yet with an air of sweetness to it. Bittersweet. You've just given me a different idea for my Twilight fanfic - we'll, not different, just another way of doing what I plan. It's scary-strange how similar this story is to what I'm Thank you for this. Duchess

omg u are awesome i don't know why I didn't subscribe to you!

woah. This is so inciteful! You did an amazing job. Congrats on this being ur hundredth fic by the way.

Sometimes I can't stand POV's but I loved this and what made it even more amazing was the fact that the person was anon. The way you described them in class watching each other came off so intense. And then having Edward watching her- knowing exactly what she's thinkiing even, if she has no clue perfectly done.

This was ... melancholy. I'm going to have to find a cheerful fic of yours to lift my spirits ... or just another fic of yours in general :D

I like this "anon bystander" point of view. It's interesting. :)

Nice work.

I swear this bystander could be me (well minis the Edward looking and smiling at me anddd goin to skool with them) Im glad I'm not the only one who can see some type of love between them

Beautiful