| Reviews for The Dark Side of the Wall |
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Mossmoon chapter 12 . 1/10/2012 Wow...you killed him? What? :( I'm not happy about that... BUT this was probably one of the best fanfics that I have read on here in a long time...good job with that! :D |
WeAllFlyHigh chapter 12 . 1/8/2012 Poor Gilbert. (Ludwig too, it must have been traumatizing to see your brother die before your eyes.) I'm really glad you finished this but I can't help but ask; would Gilbert have died even if he hadn't been shot? |
The Animanga Girl chapter 12 . 1/8/2012 TT-TT So sad... |
TheAwesomeGilbo chapter 12 . 1/8/2012 OMG GILBERT NOOOOOOOOOOOO! |
MadSockMonkey chapter 12 . 1/8/2012 Oh My God. Wow. I love this story so much, and the historical references are an epic win. And the ending is...wow. I'm happy for Gilbert, but I don't want my Gilby to diee! ;u; But then, I cannot imagine another ending. It is so beautiful, though in a sad way. I mean, I swear my heart lurched as I was reading it, right up to the end. Well worth the wait, I'd say. FNo doubt about it. :O This is pure awesome. |
Purple Sky Juliet chapter 12 . 1/8/2012 Oh wow. I honestly thought he was going to make it. The analogy to the garden of Eden was strong, along with the "freedom never tasted so sweet" being repeated at the end was a good choice as well. The scene with Ludwig and Gilbert on the wall was good as well; I think having Russia and America shooting at each other with them in the middle fit the Cold War in the scene the world was stuck between them, although for historically accuracy's sake no shot were ever actually fired during the collapse of the wall and the reunification (Russia really was kind of just like "whatever" at that point), but for the dramatic elements that you'd had throughout it worked. I'm sad he didn't make it in the end, but overall a pretty good ending. Nice job! |
ninjabuuu chapter 11 . 11/1/2011 I liked the story, though you've left the story in the dust. Please update |
MadSockMonkey chapter 11 . 10/30/2011 OMG . LOVE THIS STORY SOOO MUCH! YOU ARE AMAZING! :D |
Purple Sky Juliet chapter 11 . 10/29/2011 Good job! It was very dramatic. I'm hoping Gil isn't hurt (at least not too badly...) ~Juliette |
The Animanga Girl chapter 11 . 10/28/2011 One expression : Why! TT-TT |
LordofAmus chapter 11 . 10/28/2011 Nuu! Not Gilbert! Please don't kill Golbett! Ivan you yarooooo! Wa! This is such an awesome story! |
MiraMizu15 chapter 11 . 10/28/2011 ooh that was unexpected :) Nice! can't wait! |
granular chapter 11 . 10/28/2011 I really enjoy this story- quite original for this pairing, and certainly not badly written. There's just, uh, one tiny thing. Wherever you mean 'were', you always put 'where', which can be quite jarring, lol. This is by no means a criticism, just something to bear in mind for the future. :) |
MadSockMonkey chapter 10 . 10/16/2011 You have no idea how long I've been waiting for a fanfic that acknowledges my obsession with Prussia being Russia's captive and all that. Portrayed perfectly, just as I've always imagined it. In other words... . Can't wait for updates! And I'm so gonna watch that film! |
LordofAmus chapter 10 . 9/10/2011 Yay! Another chapter! I've been stalking this story for the next chapter! Please continue soon! I love this story! Good luck in college! |