Revan

thank god

i'm actually crying damn you why

i was actually thinking .Lars? dumb name

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More please

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

Awesome story keep it up

Did u have to make Sara die?!
I wouldn't want it to follow the Naruto shippuden movie 4 where she is already dead when Naruto goes back to his time-line.
Plz consider how we, the readers feel!

Trash story

... PIERCED dick? Really? Did you consider how painful sex would be? Let alone when he gets hard? And then the 11 inch horse dick. Then you got him taking his own cum and with some masochism in him. There is no need to put what I'm assuming to be your fantasies or preferences in this. Pierced... Dick... God I mean why?

And the story was going alright until this weirdness and unrealisticness set in. Not to mention how bad the grammar and spelling is.

One person dying? That is extremely unrealistic, even for fanfiction. Definitely edit this man. Other than that, the story is okay.

okay any straight man who lets his woman kill him with a mouth full of his own cum needs to have the ever living shit beat the fuck out of him because it shows he is a faggot who is hiding in the closest.

i am straight so i find the act of tasting my out cum utterly fucking disgusting and any woman who attempts to get me to do so will end up being bitch slapped.