This is very good writing, but I suggest that, next time you write something like this, could you put in a warning for OOCness? That’s what the writer for “Family Night” did because their Remus Lupin was evil.

Gaaaahhhh !
C'est trop court !
Je sais que cette histoire est vieille, mais j'aurais tellement aimé une suite !
Je sais que c'est un rêve, mais ça aurait été tellement chouette, de voir Sirius se faire prendre ( parce que même si je l'aime bien, il n'aurait jamais dû faire ça à Harry !)
Et Séverus en tuteur devrait être terrible, mais juste !
Bref, tout ça pour dire que j'ai aimé, même si c'était trop court à mon goût !
Merci quand même d'avoir partagé avec nous cette terrible mais belle histoire.

YES, SIRIUS TAKE THAT BITCH

I’m so angry right now, how could you?

YOU CAN’T FUCKING POST SOMETHING LIKE THIS WITHOUT A WARNING. DO YOU REALISE HOW MANY PEOPLE YOU MAY HAVE TRIGGERED?

Also this is extemely OOC. And if anyone was going to be an abuser, it would be Snape.

Wow you should make another chapter

Wow! This was such a good story, I’m glad I came across it!

Sirius would NEVER EVER do that, and I felt like the characters were a bit ooc, but other the that it was good writing.

This was well written and all but Sirius would NEVER hurt Harry... :/ also Snape was very ooc.

I love snape even more

*friends try to hold me back*
LET ME AT EM!LET ME AT EM!
IM GONNA FREAKING KILL SIRIUS I ******* SWEAR!WHOS WITH ME?

Wow. Shit. Wow. More?

The feels :( Really good though and an interesting yet disturbing take on 's different but in a good way :)

Wow. Gods I want to throw up. Well, you're a very good writer. Nice ending.

This was really good. Very well written. :) I loved that Severus was the first to see what was really going on. :) I would love to see your take on Harry's recovery with Severus as an aftermath of what happened when Sirius took Harry.

Pity it's not more graphic