Reviews for The Unforgotten Chronicles: Naruto s Begining
Guest 8 chapter 24 . 4/20
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Ryu wolf chapter 25 . 11/28/2019
Chapter 24 was great but why did you have naruto and Hana break up like that. I love to stories with those 2 a couple
Guest 8 chapter 24 . 11/4/2019
Have Minato, & Kushina tries to connect with their son.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13/2019
Type your review the nicest family ever
Monster King chapter 25 . 7/7/2019
Great job please continue
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2018
nO
my 2 guys chapter 25 . 11/9/2018
that was good keep the chapters coming
Guest chapter 25 . 1/23/2018
tell them to eat donkey shit and choke on it ! the winey little cockbites
FTLFam chapter 16 . 10/25/2017
Good story. Relationships aren't that interesting since you have no development. Naruto being a singer...no comment.
my 2 guys chapter 25 . 9/4/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
KILLERCLOWN READZ chapter 25 . 5/30/2017
THE HECK BRUH!
WHY ARE THEY DOING THIS!
WE NEED JUSTICE!
I NEED READING!
TravisUmbra chapter 11 . 1/9/2017
Im going to be blunt this is very lazily written skiping large parts that now should be diffrent events with izuna apparntly being his first girlfrenid and person who ever took instrist in him with a "they dicided to break up". And left at that really? Your apparntly makeing this mostly cannon with som anger qnd the namikazes in and if this is that cannon naruto wouldent let things with the first person he had a romantic insterist in him like that.
Theirs barly no discriptions in what naruto or anyone else looks like. Hell i imagind naruto with black hair spicificly becausr narutos not dumb in this! He would obvisily put the two in two togethet fairly quickly this is lazly written and persnaly feals to be going nowere i apolagize for being blunt close to a flame but this is my opinan on this.
Emperor-Aurora chapter 25 . 6/27/2016
Fuck...Off...
Emperor-Aurora chapter 11 . 6/21/2016
Haku's a girl goddamn it!
brandonsamsmith chapter 11 . 5/4/2016
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