| Reviews for The Unforgotten Chronicles: Naruto s Begining |
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Guest 8 chapter 24 . 4/20 Update |
Ryu wolf chapter 25 . 11/28/2019 Chapter 24 was great but why did you have naruto and Hana break up like that. I love to stories with those 2 a couple |
Guest 8 chapter 24 . 11/4/2019 Have Minato, & Kushina tries to connect with their son. |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13/2019 Type your review the nicest family ever |
Monster King chapter 25 . 7/7/2019 Great job please continue |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2018 nO |
my 2 guys chapter 25 . 11/9/2018 that was good keep the chapters coming |
Guest chapter 25 . 1/23/2018 tell them to eat donkey shit and choke on it ! the winey little cockbites |
FTLFam chapter 16 . 10/25/2017 Good story. Relationships aren't that interesting since you have no development. Naruto being a singer...no comment. |
my 2 guys chapter 25 . 9/4/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
KILLERCLOWN READZ chapter 25 . 5/30/2017 THE HECK BRUH! WHY ARE THEY DOING THIS! WE NEED JUSTICE! I NEED READING! |
TravisUmbra chapter 11 . 1/9/2017 Im going to be blunt this is very lazily written skiping large parts that now should be diffrent events with izuna apparntly being his first girlfrenid and person who ever took instrist in him with a "they dicided to break up". And left at that really? Your apparntly makeing this mostly cannon with som anger qnd the namikazes in and if this is that cannon naruto wouldent let things with the first person he had a romantic insterist in him like that. Theirs barly no discriptions in what naruto or anyone else looks like. Hell i imagind naruto with black hair spicificly becausr narutos not dumb in this! He would obvisily put the two in two togethet fairly quickly this is lazly written and persnaly feals to be going nowere i apolagize for being blunt close to a flame but this is my opinan on this. |
Emperor-Aurora chapter 25 . 6/27/2016 Fuck...Off... |
Emperor-Aurora chapter 11 . 6/21/2016 Haku's a girl goddamn it! |
brandonsamsmith chapter 11 . 5/4/2016 09 |