I am back to reading ffs because of the stress this pandemic has caused me. Like you , I have a few unfinished storiesin other websites). Maybe it is just better to delve into our imagination. Real world seems too crazy and stupid now

one word : MOREEEEEEE

This story started it out so well, please don't ditch it!

Hello, I just found your story and loved it, please please
please update real soon!

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Yay! Please continue updating! I loved how you portrayed Rin and Sesshomaru. Can't wait to find out how the "family reunion" will go, maybe a playful fight?

Criticism: some of your sentences are structured a little oddly. But it's still readable so nothing major. I also feel like your punctuations are off, some places need a comma while some may do better with a "linking" word. Again not a big deal.

Great Job! Good Luck!

More please...

I wonder how the reunion will go I hope you update again soon

Loove it!

so happy you updated!
please please continue

Yay updated!
Hopefully nothing happens but knowing them a peaceful reunion probably impossible

Oh Sesshomaru you are funny

Agreeing with previous guest. Please update soon

Please update! Sesshrin forever

Yay you used a Tensaiga on this story!

Rin is so dense! She exploded in front of her
lord and did not meet his sword or his claws,
what else does she need to prove her special!

But this feisty personality suits her though, so kudos for
making a believable Rin.