That just tore my heart out, but it was beautifully written and well done

Sad, but I really liked this. It's very appropriate that you have Leia dying in action to save her grandchild. She's brave and she knows how to kick butt. I'm also glad that Leia has a lightsaber and knows how to wield it. Great last line!

So sad - I'm about to cry here!

A really wonderfull story, sad but beautifull *looking for the packet of tissues and clean the tears*

Greetings from Germany

Nicole

That was so sad. I'm crying. What Luke said at the end is what got to me. :'( nice job.