STX rather than review each chapter I will review the whole story here.I don't know how I have missed your ff up till now. I went looking for your post vacation story, which I am assuming was the Hawaiian vacation, and ended up here. I am delighted that I did.

This story has all of the angst, and struggles of John Mitchell plus some of the theory lines of your blog posts. There have been some intriguing plot twists and turns.

All in all a very enjoyable read. Keep it up, I am looking forward to reading more of you're ff, and maybe someday a published work.

annm

What can I say. Crying.

"The fangs digging into his neck were repulsive. It was Herrick all over again, and just like Herrick, it felt like rape. A physical rape, a soul rape"

This was great. The comparison makes it truly horrifying and that is the only was it can be portrayed to understand those recruited well enough.

Great chapter.

Great chapter.

Great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

This was so original and expansive and it has the feel of a substantial piece of work. Ooh its great! Cant wait to find out what happens next. Thank you so much. I do hope here will be lots more chapters!

This chapter was pure perfection. It flows beautifully and it is such a social commentary on a modern way of life. Mitchell's voice is very powerful and I love the sarcasm and self-deprecation.

I find myself waiting impatiently for every installment.

Thank you for writing it.

Intersting story, I loved the desciption of organised chaos in heaven - Very In a matter of life and death-like. Tense and atmospheric writing for Mitchell's hell. The latest chapter has a mad twist but I'm sticking with it!

Very original, well done

Interesting and mysteries! I look forward to your next update!

Loving this story, So different from any others I've read on here.

Can't wait for more.

Another great chapter.

Thank you!

"One minute, you are fighting for dear life with a very, very big tiger, next thing; your hunting mate is presenting you a fang for your necklace collection. McNair would have loved that kid."

I love the humor in between the dramatic scenes.

Original, written with great flair. Thought provoking. Excellent depth of character expansion of Mitchell.

Thank you again for the swiftness of the next chapter.

I'm so intrigued. I can't wait.

I can feel the anxiety flowing in my veins. This is just beautifully written and I'm addicted now.

I also love the depiction of the rope and sticks. I always wondered how Annie explained to Owen what happened after to make him that scared, I think this would do justice to his reaction.

I'm intrigued of the past with Annie that Mitchell doesn't want to admit yet. You're spoiling us with such great writing and with the swiftness of your posting. I hope you post the next one soon.

Thank you