I hope you update soon! This is so good!

Um, hiya! Okay, so not to be one of those pushy people who bother you to update... But I'm going to anyway.

Okeydokey, I reallllllllllly love this story, and I'm kinda bummed out that you havent updated since 2011, sooooo if by any chance you see this review, pretty please update soon? With cherries on top? :)

Clara

You should update... and even though you are more of a comicy girl, your really good at writting serious stuff. :) Also I think Max has a right to be pissed. Ive been though a slightly similar situation, and quite frankly I hate my "father." So update soon please!

Hey. I would like 2 point out that u have not updated this story for almost 10 months to the day. Also u sad u were not giving up On this story so if u could update it that would be great.

Ps. I have read the other stories. By u they are really good

I loved it. ..

Youu gotta wrote more (;

Update soon? This story is so precious :)

Emeraldstarforever

xxx

Hurry the fuge up and update!

it's whet, actually. otherwise it means someone urinated on our appetites.

Awwwww its ok! We understand! It happens to all the good writers ;) and I loved this all and can't wait till u update again! It'll be a dream come true :)

Idk when u updated this but it's going well so that means u should update! How about Max finally explodes bout jeb and fang is there to listen and stuff. And then something happens and they realize they r falling for each other. Maybe fangs pov? Idk but UPDATE!

Awwww. I got sad. :( I really hope you get out of writer's block cause this is honestly an awesome story, I was so ready to love it. lol

Aww :(

But I get it. I have a story that I haven't updated since, like, the beginning of the year! And I said I'd update soon... didnt even post a AN.. Heh, whooooooops!

But I love this story so far and I hope you come out of your writer's block soon :)

don't worry, i won't give up on you! i hope your writer's block passes soon(:

people get writers block all the time, happens to the best of us. just don't give up! this is too good of a story to give up! i find what works for me when i have writers block (not for fanfiction but for a separate book i'm writing) i listen to some good music for like 3 days. just listen to all different kinds of music and then let the music tell you stories. you never know! one of my best ideas came from 'But It's Better If You Do' by Panic! at the Disco. keep writing! you have talent! :]

Oh, just to tell you, the author note as a chapter thing is illegal with fanfiction rules. So, I would delete this, then make another one with a bit of story attached.