Two suggestions: one that was some funny innuendo shit, do more. Two, Squall vs. Martine the clash of the icy undertones. Also this takes a whole different approach than your other fics, it does seem weird but just to say I share your opinion on the whole seifer never slept with Rinoa. Anyway I am interested in what you have planned so keep writing. I don't agree on the Sorcesses never having children, but then agree to disagree eh? Keep it up I one day want to read this to completion.

Will you be posting any more chapters? I'm really enjoying this fan-fic!

Oh great! Now I want to know what happened and what Rinoa was doing at G-Garden!

Also, why does Martine have to be such an ASS!? I mean that guy was a complete douche and weak willed bag of shit who I only paid attention to merely because I wanted my Ifrit card back! That being said... I can see why you made him such a scumbag. Heh heh pardon the rant.

The phallic jokes bit is true genius and I couldn't stop laughing at them myself and I like the inner perspective you present to us and once again further develop and paint a truly believable picture of the wonderful characters of this fandom. While it was slightly depressing that the team gets so little time together, their everlasting bonds really do deserve to be treasured and while scarce, they reflect life getting in the way of the things that really matter and I respect the fact that you manage to acknowledge that in this story and not merely paint a rosy picture for us.

Regardless, I cannot wait for the next chapter and hope to read more from you! Congratulations on this latest chapter!

Cheers
Keep Writing

still have no idea why this is rated M after 11 chapters...

Mature as always, niq, :P If I didn't know better, well I don't know what I'd think. Great chapter, love you playing around with the characters like you do. I know your busy, but don't forget petal amoung lies. Also, long shot, but by keep your mind open for any minis, for me? Rin was halarious in this chapter. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work girl.

Hearing that surname of whoever is...is kinda make activate my green minds. just kidding. Well what are Matine's intentions by the way after telling Rinoa those harsh words? That considers a challenge already. Every time I read this story I always remembers this line. "Empty promises, Squall. That's all you're ever good for!"

And what does that Accident in G-Garden the old man talking about?

Great chapter! I've missed this story! And funny too...all the phalic jokes...hehe. But seriously, I loved the light hearted banter between the friends...and when Squall added to it, instead of giggling I think my draw dropped in astonishment! Who knew he had it in him!

And Martine...I detest Martine and now more so.

Hope I don't have to wait another year!

It's too late at night for a good review...but here's me, hopin for an update soon...

Sorry for the super duper late replay :'( I was caught up with my own things that spending time here is kind of short. Anyway, on to my review

In a way, I kind of agree on your view on what happen to Seifer and Rinoa during FF8. Nothing much happen except having a crush on Rinoa's part. Frankly speaking, I thought Seifer was Rinoa's brother when Zell mention "So you are Rinoa's b...' before Seifer cut it off when I play it the very first time.

And yes, Nomura, the character designer had actually wanted a love trinagle between Seifer Rinoa and Squall(hence some of the CG work depiciting the three of them) but had also no idea why the idea did not make it through the storyboard. I read these in some of the FF8 interview:)

Everything seems smoothsailing now for the couple. When you mention about a new title, the word 'River' came to my mind because their relationship in this story reflects the way how the water in the river moves about. From smooth sailing to rough current and back again to smooth. (In my view anyway, for some strange reasons, the title, Reflecting the River Flow and River Reflection came into my mind right after I finish typing the reasons. Just a suggestion though. Your current title is good too)

See you around!

I like your style.. Amongst all your fan fics, I like this one the most. I have only read the first three chapters. They got me hooked on to it :) Very well written miss. :)

Cool, I really like your story!

Haha you can count on my reviews!

I do love that everything is so simple and straight forward in this chapter at first and then you layered on the deeper things like them being apart, the sorceress powers and garden politics to them not wanting to sleep in each others' rooms. It's a great way to add value to the chapter (not that it needed it)

I also love the emulating of emotions thing too. Rinoa's humor though is so funny and she's so cute in this chapter. (Squall's speech marathons LOL)

I also like how Squall suddenly became eloquent showing the big part of how Squall opens up the best to Rinoa. It's really sweet and refreshing to hear Squall talk so much LOL.

Super nice work and I hope you're doing well and all.

Cheers
Keep Writing

Poor squall... No night cap for you!

Can't wait for the next arc

Sigh. I love when you update. :)
I liked your version on what happened between Rinoa and Seifer. Makes sense and fits the whole FF8 story rather well. I'm also glad they have cleared the air on this matter. Now it's time to move on and let their relationship progress!

Oh, and the part where Squall reflects on how Rinoa would drink the glass and cheekily announce it 100% empty, or however you worded all of that...nice. I really liked it. It made for a great description of who Rinoa really is. Nice work, Muk. :)

w00t! w00t!

i loooooved it _ -tee- i think your backstory to Rinoa x Seifer was done really well and could have easily been in the game...

but they gots to be wiffout each other for two weeks. oh my goodness, i'm already tearing up for them.

and i know this is totally random but: YAY! less than three! -tee- i only knew a few people who used that! it's awesome! but i know how you feel - having all these views and so little reviews...

and i'm totally looking forward to the next chapter...