I noticed there are chapters missing. Why is that?

Came back to this story after goodness knows how long, and apparently all the things that made the story rated M were ripped out... uh... someone care to explain?

Listen I see what your doing with the whole moemon ranger thing and I have one thing to say to you... you do a pretty damn good job of it

I'm sure you've heard this hundreds of times before, but great job! At least so far...

I have sectoral heterochromia. But i'm a guy and I'm also not a pokemon. Lolz

What happened to the story?

Did you know that Aurore is Dawn's French name?

Aww. No vicemail? I just miss those situations where there is an obvious choice that will solve everything, but you're forced to make a dumber choice because the game programmers want more action in the game.

Aw. I kind of like Keith. I know what it's like to be hated by almost everyone in the entire universe.

Like in the manga.

Piplup, but ok.

Authoritah. Also, it seems like this is getting nowhere. Shouldn't they have gotten into a village by now?

Should be a chimchar, but this is obviously a reference to your first story, so it's fine.

Miasma? Like in
Inuyasha? JK.

... Isn't it supposed to be a Pachisiru?