Its great! Now I'm wondering why she cried.. I'm guessing that the reason is the possibility of him not coming back again or maybe because she have a bf .. haha nvm.. :3

I really liked this and I think it has a lot of potential to be a full length story! Nicely done!

-Charmy

id definatley like to see this continued.

you MUST continue this story... .n. please

._. ... if you don't continue this I'll hunt you down and kill you with my bare hands. Seriously. I am NOT kidding. This is serious shit. Though I'll probably just kidnap you and keep you there until you start AND finish the story o.o You should now by now i am not serious about anything of the stated before :D, I love this and I hope you one day (preferably soon) you male this into a multi-chapter fic, I'll be waiting with great hopes, Lulu

Lol the song Roxas was singing (err... Humming?) ummm... its Yellow by Coldplay? Yes? No? I'm kinda sure it is... cos I love that song to pieces... Meh I love the story btw xD though I don't understand the ending...

You HAVE to continue this. I loved it so much. I want to know what happens the new couple. PLEASE CONTINUE!

So sad. A perfect love separated becuz of a stupid parent. Why? Roxasnamine forever. :(

Make it a multi chapter story! This was amazing! :)

I would enjoy to see this as a bigger fic.

I'd like to understand how all this came about.

It's believeable and everything.

Nothing seems exaggerated at all.

Amazing work.

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS! oh my word this was so good! I wish I could write as good as you! Seriously, you NEED to continue please! You did an amazing job, really.

SO CUTEE! Please publish more soon! I absolutely loved this! :D

:OOO

This was amazing! It honestly was! It's based on a true story? That's cool.

I really liked this. It was adorable!

I can't wait for the longer version :D

This story was AWESOME! XD

The ending was a little sad though; one of those bitter-sweet things. I think it would be amazing if you continued with this. It has a lot of potential and I really want to see where you go with it.

I look forward to reading what you write!

Aaaaaw that was sooo cute! Yes! Please! Write the rest! I want to hear more now!