Don’t know if you will see this but this story is beautiful! Only problem is some grammer and sentence structure!️

And such a son! An absolutely magnificent story! I love it!

Nope, you have four! I love this fic! I can't wait for the next chapters!

KYAAAA I LOVE IT! I reallyreallyreally like Tony. I think he'd have made a wonderful big brother.

All four so sweet. i love this and half expected a ziva/ducky/jimmy/jenny/vance chapter but just these four are perfect. you have captured all essences very well! i congratulate you

keep writing
IzzyDelta

where is ziva ?! why didnt she come in this ?

Aww. Finally found this story, very sweet. Lovely introspection.

wow, you write Gibbs well! nice job on this!

"A slap to the face is an insult — to the back of the head is a wake-up call." -Gibbs

*shaky smile* That was amazing... :')

me encanto,muy original describes muy bien a toni,entieno porque ziva no encaja ahi.

Beautiful. Loved your portrayal of Tony through Gibbs's eyes. Great writing! :)

Aw so sweet big brother Tony to Abby's rescue. he would do anything to help and protect her.

Big brother Tony to help McGee take down a bad guy then help an injured Tim. And be all worried and his health. But also Tim so worried about Tony dying in his sleep b/c he cant breath b/c of his lungs.

Never really liked Kate to much. But you could tell they cared for each other in the brother/sister sense.

So right Tony is the son Gibbs never had. And Gibbs is the dad Tony should of had. They feel a place in each other heart that has been empty.

Nice chapter. It's sad that this one was the last chapter, but it was a good way to finish it. Wouldn't mind if you add some other chapter to it later, though! :D

Nice...I always thought of Gibbs as the father figure, Tony as the older brother, Tim as the younger brother, Ziva as the older sister, and Abby as the younger sister...Ducky and Jimmy would be the uncle and cousin respectively :)

This story was so good! You are an amazing writer! Keep up the good work!