T .AWESOME!
The ending was badass!

ROLANDO

Please write more. Please I'm going nuts.

UPDATE PLEAZZZZ! REALLY GOOD STORY!

An excellent one shot, keep up the good work!

Seeing where this would go would be amazing!

Wow, E,P,I,K!

This is cool. I really like the concept, though some details were a bit blury until the end. Nonetheless: you are a very good writer, and this was a great one-shot. Would have liked to read more of it, but oh well.

Sincerely,
Ellesra

great chapter :D

update ! XD

This is both good and terrible. On the one hand it's sort of a cool concept, and it is well written. On the other... the ending makes zero sense. Sasuke is exhausted and can't be Naruto (which I really don't buy since a simple Tsukiyomi would annihilate him) - ergo, Naruto should just kill him. Instead he runs away after making a pointless promise for the future that he could have just as easily fulfilled in the present - one could even say that NOW is the ONLY time he is likely to be able to kill Sasuke. The other Naruto who died has 8 years more experience than him and he STILL lost (which also galls me since Sasuke is such a loser), what chance does this new Naruto have after letting Sasuke rest? It's just an incredibly poorly thought out move that will result in his death. And so in a way you've really killed any significance the ending might have had by having this new Naruto more or less guarantee his own destruction.

That was excellent in every way.

Great story, it could be the begining of a good fic.

Serves Sasuke right. How could he have been incredulous at that speech after essentially killing his former friend? I think it was cool too :D

very it up

YESSSSHHH! KILL THAT MUCKAFUCKA SASUKAAAYYYY! LOVE YAMI NARUTO!