| Reviews for The Boy Who Cried Wolf |
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DrunkOnMusic chapter 1 . 7/12/2018 Short and sweet :) |
Keira-Hime chapter 1 . 8/6/2011 So cute ;P |
XTREME-RANDOMNESS chapter 1 . 7/4/2011 Okay, so I have a suggestion; edit the summary to something tender, cuz I was having second thoughts coming to this story and it's freaking good and cute! I loved it ~favourites~ |
AceKindel chapter 1 . 6/21/2011 aww so sweet :) |
Chewy Chewbacca chapter 1 . 4/21/2011 'Tis cute and typical of Ikuto, Karen :D Only complaint, is the first line that you know of already, and that when he says, "I love you." it feels a little sudden for him to say it already (I know he's a play boy and likes to tease her, but it still feels a little rushed for his nature) Unless you're planning on writing a second part, those are the only things I noticed :) |
Maissekka chapter 1 . 4/20/2011 A good story, good format, no grammar errors that I saw. The only thing is I think you meant to put " she does all the purifying after all" instead ofbwhat you had ( or something like that ). So fluffy! I love Amuto! Good job. The-White-Empress |
AmethystOpal chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 So sweet! I love it ;) |