WIDJQJD I KNEW RAITO WAS GONNA BE AT WHAMMYS

This chapter made me so happy

Aww, this was sweet

I really hope you update this someday! It's the best Death Note fic I've read so far!

ah alas, another one of the countless unfinished lawlight fics that will plague me until the end of time

god L was such a bastard in this story I was REELING— however, I rly did love the characterization of everyone. I would’ve loved to see them develope more. regardless, this was a good read and I don’t regret it even tho I am feeling a little empty lol

dude L is a salty little bitch I love him

Still waiting for update...
I like how L obsessing over Light, I want to know Light's full reason for running away...

I want to bash my head to read this and see that it's not complete! I love the characters and dialog between them! It's funny how childish L and Light are being with the developing love with each other. Been years from the latest update, but please if possible to finish it. Many want to know what could happened next, with the cliffhanger just teetering an open abyss.

The part where Mello accused Light of Killing somebody had me dying because I thought that too. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Part of me is like poor L and the other half is like f*ck L.

L, you idiot

Matt, calm tf down

Mello, stop following your teacher's example

This is absolutely beautiful both of them are little shits

I am greatly enjoying this and I am enjoying the current non-yaoi dynamic, but the yaoi will come soon enough all things considered n_n

wow. just.. wow. you are amazing. i know everyone from DN, but what you did was retain who they were and let the story bloom beautifully. the characters, the storyeverything is well-made. thank you so much for sharing. i hope you are ok, Bahari!

*raises hands and feet* I DO. JUST KISS ALREADY.

OH DEAR I AM DIGGING MY OWN GRAVE READING THIS FIC BECAUSE I AM FALLING DEEPER IN LOVE WITH L BECAUSE GEEZUS HOW DARE YOU BE THIS ADORABLE?! AND WHY DO YOU STILL HAVE THOSE DINOSAUR VITAMINS GROW UP L. SRSLY. *coughs* please excuse my nonsense ramblings, regarding my serious feedback of this fic. I am simply amazed, because of the thorough details you have here, you are a genius that you are able to reach L's mentality. I am able to understand the way his mind would be running. You have grasped his character well, and maaan, have i mentioned how adorable he is here? He's selfish and childish and stubborn and refuses to lose. He's alive in my heart okay. Anyway, i am so excited to venture thiis wonderful fic. And i must say it was difficult for me to find a LawLight fic that would stick to me and this was a blessing that was A okay to my senses. P. S. I am a newb in this ship.