Loved this story!

Really enjoyed this, I love what you did with the characters! I do wish they’d been a bit older, I think it would have made the story feel a bit more realistic, but it was greatyou’re really talented

Perfect. Absolutely love the boys getting excited over water pistols

Still a great story ..need more mob stories like this ...thanks agin have fun

is the unknown Mike?

honestly Bella needs to kick Jacob to the curb; he's trash

All hail Rose, the empress of real talk

Charlie is definitely in over his head, and Jacob is the worst, sanctimonious and patronizing af

I love how you write Edward as foul mouthed and sweet, delightful!
Plus, Bella is logical without being totally OOC

I'm not sure as I read this how many years ago it was written but here I am still rereading it

As much as I want to love this story, I can’t with Bella. She’s naive, obnoxious and sometimes just plain annoying. I really wanted to like her but blah. I wish she was more assertive and badass but she’s just a teen who’s naive enough to be stupid.

Dommage que la traduction google soit si dure en lecture mais franchement je me suis éclatée à lire cette histoire.
Merci

I’m betting dollars to doughnuts she’s pregnant, I mean, it was inevitable. Maybe she forgot about the birth control with all the Charlie madness...

Oh shit! what I just exclaimed because of that last sentence. Thank god this story is finished so I don’t have to wait for an update lol. XD

This was another phenomenal chapter! I love that we got more of the Princess and E’s relationship development.