Does Zexion have a thing for BDSM? That is what I thought when he gagged and bound Axel.

Really interesting story! Gotta say I wasn't expecting this twist on the oh so lovable Organization XIII. Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm out!

Schemer of Oblivion here, and I'm too lazy to log in. Haha you're welcome! I loved the new chapter and I can't wait for the next! You're such an awesome author :D

Oh my goodness Zexion loves cute heartless... Adorable,
i just died with Roxas crying over dramas if i was Zexion would've left to

Hilarious chapter, short or not i Loved it, sorry i took so long to Review

Moogles with eye-patches are epic!

New headcanon: Zexion secretly loves (or nonexistenty loves?) cute, living things. Because if he... nonexistently loved inanimate cutesy things like Lisa Frank merchandise then there would be a problem. Yeah. *awkwardly laughs*
Anyway, short, yet good all the same, sort of chapter, looking forward to the next :D

-A.J.

Got ya, kinky review button! Haha, this is AWESOME! I'm never going to look at the organization the same again.

OMG... AN UPDATE! You do not know how excited I got when I saw this! *squeals* Oh sorry about that... Anyway... this chapter rocks my socks off!
Aww Zexion loves moogles! :D They look squishy to me, like the Pillsbury dough boy.
I'm getting excited for chapter 19!

3 words...
THIS STORY ROCKS!

Zebras with purple hats? Awesome.

That scream: was Xemnas. 'Nuff said.

Oh god becky was his chakram,

Yay fire breathing zebras with purple hats awesome!
Poor zexion lol

that chapter was hilarious,
yeah sorry I'm fresh out of Ideas, i have failed you, I'm sorry!

Uh...no offense, but the identity of Becky actually kinda hurts, its anticlimatic.

Oh, for the love of gushy teen romance novels, didn't someone ever teach Roxas that LSD is BAD? Trippy visions of fire breathing zebras and Nyan Cat may seem cool at first, kids, but in the end it'll just give you the urge to read Twilight to sooth your aching soul, and none of us want that. Jk, jk.
Anyway, I'm happy to see that you've written a new chapter, though I will forever be confused as to why Squall and Cloud are in the Castle That Never Was. Who knows.
Well, until next time,
-A.J.

Cloud and Leon! So random, but I'd bet they'd do that...

XDD I love Becky! She's awesomely kickass.

Does Zexion's book happen to be City of Bones? ;3

I must admit, this chapter has by far some of the best quotes .

"All hope is lost..." Roxas muttered weakly, his voice was slightly raspy, as if he had just been through a terrible 72-hour war. Fighting nonstop, like the mighty warrior he is...Ok, he was basically just being a melodramatic teenager, kind of like he was in the game.

That had to be my favorite, among others I can't remember off the top of my head.

I did spot a few mistakes, like one time you meant to say "were" but you typed in "where." Just some friendly advice to read over each chapter a few times before posting.

I would like to know what series Zexion was reading, spoilers are my friend, so if you wuldn't mind telling me, I would love to hear about it :D

As for ideas, well, I have one, though it may seem a bit outlandish... Have you by chance ever watched the anime Ouran High School Host Club? If you have, then I'm sure you know where I'm going with this, but it you haven't, I would like to tell you more about my idea :D

Until next chapter,

~A.J.