Reviews for Hekili Pao
Guest chapter 12 . 9/20
Loved this - not sure how I've only just stumbled across it.
mrspencil chapter 12 . 3/29
Cracked up at the slide show. Very well done:-)
BelunaTH chapter 12 . 10/5/2019
OMG! soooo goood! thank you so much!
Killmyaccount17597 chapter 12 . 12/17/2017
Awesome fic! Loved it sooo much!
Eloeehez chapter 12 . 8/20/2017
Mele Cowabunga! LOL I really liked this fic as I both like hurt Steve and badass Steve. I like how here he's some of both, chasing the bad guys, surviving a place that is almost certain death, then needing some assistance to get out. Loved it!
Guest chapter 12 . 6/25/2017
well this should of had more of Steve's seal buddies in it very disappointed
Guest chapter 10 . 6/25/2017
I wanna see more of his seal buddies
Sarai chapter 12 . 8/26/2016
awesome!
weemcg33 chapter 12 . 4/13/2015
I'm pretty sure I've read this one before but it doesn't really matter, it was just as good the second or maybe it was the third time... anyway this story was awesome with a capital 'A'!
I loved the rescue and Boomer and Buck are great OC's...loved everything about this story, the action, the hurt and the humour. Thanks!
plws chapter 12 . 9/10/2012
I just reread this story and enjoyed it as must as the first time. Thank you for writing an excellent story.
SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 12 . 6/4/2012
That fic was awesome! I loved how intense it was for the rescue- and it had a good dose of h/c at the end!

Thanks for writing and sharing with us!

Song
Joy01 chapter 12 . 4/17/2012
Really awesome story! Thanks!
SeanJ111 chapter 12 . 2/5/2012
This was great, a really well written story. I loved their interactions and banter, it was very much in character. I also really liked that it wasn't overly emotional, in keeping with how they are on the show. Thank you for sharing this and I look forward to reading more of your stories!
Lidil chapter 12 . 1/28/2012
Still laughing.

Wait.

Let me catch my breath.

This last scene was s-o-o them, I could see it clearly.

Well done.
neptune60 chapter 12 . 1/6/2012
Excellent story. One of the best I've read. Very intense and awesome Steve whump with very realistic medical follow up. Loved Chin going into the cave to find Steve. Could totally understand Chief Kahele's position, no rescue team would put their crew in danger in such circumstances or even go out in the dark and I thought Danny behaved like a jerk to him.

I know Danny was concerned for Steve's well being but I get fed up with him constantly ranting at Steve. Steve's not going to change, he's a Navy Seal and he's not going to back down when he's got murderers in his midst. He didn't go deliberatly looking for trouble. I love H50 because of the way Steve is and I hope he never changes. Great story, Thanks for a fantastic read.
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