It's awesome! When do you plan to continue?

This chapter is the one that really sold this FanFiction to me. Your characterization of Katara, Zuko, and Iroh were spot on and I felt like I could hear the voice actors’ reading the lines in my head. I like how the Zuko and Iroh dynamic fits so in character with Zuko coldly acknowledging Iroh’s suggestions with respect but without trying to sound like he was giving in, which works with his character really well. Katara’s loyalty to her friends and channeling Sokka’s sarcasm also fit really welltry saying that again louder, that should help” paraphrased was hilarious). Zuko already comes off as conflicted but determined, which is exactly what I love about his character. Glad that unlike many inexperienced authors, you didn’t force any attraction between Katara and Zuko here, which is very believable. All in all, I am glad I started reading this, and am looking forward to finishing it to the end!

Imma just comment just to say that what you created is amazing... and to get the comments closer to 666 reviews

You know how you're in the comics era now? Is this going to go into the legend of Korra too? Where Kya and Izumi are Zuko and Katara's children, and Bumi, Tenzin, Lin and Suyin are Aang and Toph's children?

When are you going to continue this? I'm eager to find out how the atla comics would be different if it had taang and zutara.

Is this the last chapter?

Yay! You saved Toph's chastity! I hated how they ruined the original Gaang in LOK. In fact I hate LoK. It takes everything sacred and beautiful in ATLA and ruines it. Korra is just the worst. Like she fits the description of a psychopath, and Mako, Bolin, and Assami are bland as heck. Basic batman backstories. You can tell how lazy the writers got. Bolin in a street gang? Lol not likely. No consistency with character experience and character behavior. Best character was Tenzin, and Lin was interesting. But the rest was horrible.

I absolutely LOVE the Catholic elements you've snuck into this fanfic. It's so well done and so...comforting. I hope you're faith stays strong so you may lead many souls to heaven. Maybe we'll both make it and get to meet?

Oh my gosh! No onder this fic has no sexual stuff and alot of clean moral lessons! You're Catholic! I'm so glad. Honestly it's hard to find fanfics with out all the overexagerated sexual tension and even harder to find Catholic writers. I'm Catholic too and it's just nice to read things that don't morally conflict with my faith. and I gotta say I love your writing style and all the extra dialogue feels so natural that sometimes I forget what was and wasn't in the show. The character developement is amazing and I'm so glad I started reading this fic. I'll definitely check out your other works and your favorites list.

I like this a lot! You change just enough for it to be interesting, while still making it feel just like the original show. One of the best fanfictions I've ever read!

On another note, I really like that you keep it chaste. A lot of other writers I think forget characters' ages when they write romance, and stuff happens WAY too quickly. Also, I like the occasional notes of Catholicism, as a Catholic myself! I think it really ties in with the themes of the story. (Though on another note, I feel like Catholicism and Buddhism as well as other Eastern religions share some philosophical similarities, but I digress!)

Speaking of themes, I'm really impressed with how much wisdom there is in this, and how everything is so connected.

This was honestly quite fulfilling to read to far, and I'll be looking forward to more of your work!

Love how you’re capturing the post-war part of the story. I think I’ve rarely ever seen people go beyond it. Your take is super realistic and enjoyable.

Iroh mentions a duel between katara and zuko. A rematch?

Zuko didn't burn Katara.

Hi, I was re-reading this wonderful fic and in this chapter when Katara finds her necklace in her room she mentions that her and Zuko dueled...but they didn't with the new edits you've made. It confused me when I read it. Just letting you know. Hope you're having a wonderful day.

This story is honestly written pretty badly. They way you wrote the pairing isnt realistic, they never had a chance. The way Katara always choose Aang over Zuko is literally a death blow for any "romance at a moderate, realistic pace". You cant be together with someone if that someone is already in a relationshop with someone else. (And no I didnt read all of it after 36 chapters or so of Katara only thinking how she can use Zuko to fight his own nation and family, and not seeing her own faults in the way she pushed him into fighting against them it got pretty boring)