Wow this is such a good story and I would really like to read more of this story and I hope to read more of it soon so please update again soon.

Gary is a pervert. Update soon!

Hello. Super sorry for not updating this in years. D: But Im writing the next one and working on it. Kindof deciding what to do. Might turn it into a choose-your-own-adventure type of way and leave options at the end of every chapter for you guys to choose... or kinda leave a comments/suggestions box and I'll decide which paths to take in the story. Unless you guys rly want something to happen. And I'm crossing my fingers that the actual sex happens way down the line to build up the tension (and frustration) in us when Brock finally claims Ash. Hehe.

Hun, I like this'n all, but you haven't updated for over two years... are you dead?

Can't wait to see what happens next.

So cute!

this lives up to mine, and I wonder when Brock's gonna confess, and Ash too well until more, later and have fun writing :)

PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER ONE

threesome, threesome. threesome, threesome, and moresomes!

Ahh this is SO awesome!
I really hope you write more! X'D

I love it

Really good and really hot xD Please continue soon!

i want moar!

This is a really good read, I was too lazy to sign into my account but I hope you finish this one, it will for-fill all of my guilty pleasures.

-Mareepe

Ash, the curious kid, and Brock, the rock hard gym leader. Mmmmm...

Brock's gonna top, no doubt about it. Man, update soon!