| Reviews for Torture |
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   cassiehoran chapter 1 . 5/30/2011 Awww. :]] that was really cute! :) |
| WillowEchoRiver chapter 1 . 4/25/2011 The only words I can manage right now are 'Awwwwwwww' That was ADORABLE! |
| OhSoIris chapter 1 . 4/21/2011 Loved it :D |
| alex02 chapter 1 . 4/20/2011 awesome |
| SeddieGirl chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 Loveeeeeddd this3 |
| Annfnancnjak chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 Good story and I love the plot, although I find you useing too many exclamition marks - ! Example- "Well..." I say! There was no need for a exclamition mark there. I read your other two oneshots posted and this problem kept ne from enjoying the story to it's full potential. Don't let me discourage you because I am trying to help for future reference. Use a period not a exclamtion mark next time:) keep writing:D |
