| Reviews for The Moments in the Memories |
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Guest chapter 5 . 12/16/2019 I hoped Brennan would have had a living will because I can't see her wanting to linger too long if there's no hope. And f you Max, it's not your call really, hell its not Booth's call if Brennan had her desires clearly stated legally somewhere. |
2JWR6 chapter 9 . 1/9/2012 You gave the couple a happy ending that was interesting to read. The entire story was founded on the premiss that the thing Bones fans wanted to happen had already happened: Bones and Booth came together. I appreciated that the memories started near the timeline of the story and then proceeded back in time to the moment everyone was curious of: how did your bones and booth finally get together. The memories from each character from Hodgins to even Sweets was appropriate to each individual including their conclusions from it (i.e. Hodgins' hope, Sweets' certainty, Cam's fear). I especially appreciated your take on Parker's reaction. His protectiveness of his family gave some background to your final comments about the Booth family being enviable. The story left me wanting more which is good. I wasn't bored of the premiss at any point. I hope you write more multi-chapter Bones fics in the future. This story indicates you have an excellent imagination and the talent to focus it in your writing. Best of luck in future writing ventures. |
ickleails chapter 9 . 5/7/2011 lovely very lovely! it flowed well between the :( bits to the :) bits... |
jmbatt chapter 9 . 5/6/2011 very nice ending. I read the last chapter and the epilogue together so forgive me for not reviewing seperately. I liked how you wove realism (in regards to brain injuries) into the story - not just a disney ending... Brennan's had to work for eveyrthing she got - this as well. And in the end, love trumps everything else! :-) |
RowdyRomantic chapter 8 . 5/6/2011 very emotional and in Character. |
EmmyMayyy chapter 9 . 5/6/2011 You know how much I already loved these chapters, but seeing them posted is just... breathtaking to say the least. You've blossomed from a shy little writer into someone everyone wants to read. The amount of reviews you've received doesn't do you any justice. You're talent. Courageous for doing something different. And simply amazing. From now and into the future I'm always here, and I know you'll always be there for me. (I may call upon you in a few days to bounce some ideas off for a new fic for me. Its time I dig into the realms of Bones writing again). XO |
SouthunLady chapter 9 . 5/6/2011 Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Really nice epilogue. |
KlingonGal8489 chapter 9 . 5/6/2011 This was such a beautiful story. There wasn't a single chapter that I didn't find well-written and believable. Great job, and I hope you continue to write more! |
BookishlyStrange chapter 9 . 5/6/2011 Oh my. I love it. It was great. Almost made me cry. I would love a follow up that follows bren's recovery. :) keep up the great work. |
BandB4ever chapter 9 . 5/6/2011 . Precioso, estoy tan contenta, me encanto la historia. Me hiciste sufrir mucho, pero ahora me has hecho muy feliz. Ya quiero leer otra de tus historia. Seguro que me encantara tanto como esta. :) |
BandB4ever chapter 8 . 5/6/2011 Aun sonrió, bueno estas compensando toda la tristeza que hiciste que tuviera, ahora no puedo dejar de reír. Espero el epilogo. estoy emocionada por saber que pasa. |
SouthunLady chapter 8 . 5/6/2011 An absolutely beautiful chapter. Wish we could have that on the show. I would believe it. |
anonymous.individual chapter 8 . 5/6/2011 Wow - that was great :) |
KlingonGal8489 chapter 8 . 5/5/2011 So wonderful! I loved the flashback scene. You said everything I want them to eventually say to each other! |
BandB4ever chapter 7 . 5/5/2011 Hoy por fin me has hecho feliz! Muy Feliz debo decir, rebosante de alegría para contagiar. Me ha encantado, fue tan lindo. Había tanto amor y alegría. Definitivamente si me llego a casar quiero un marido como Booth, jejejeje, si no que ni se acerque. |