| Reviews for Fragmentation |
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RochelleRene chapter 1 . 8/14/2013 Oh my gosh… I know this is probably completely random, because you wrote this ages ago, but I just came across it. I just have to tell you that it is so beautiful and moving. I can't believe the imagery you were able to produce, the emotions you were able to portray so clearly, and the power of their interactions even with very little dialogue. I felt like I was there, in that room, a fly on the wall. It was such a moving piece to read. This is a real gem… I wish I had read it sooner. You should be really proud of this, even if you are done with House. |
givemekevinbacon chapter 1 . 9/26/2012 Oh wow. This was beautifully written, and you captured the tragicness of their relationship so well. The inclusion of Dominika was the perfect balance to this story-I loved the image of an outsider looking in. Great job! |
Duckie Nicks chapter 1 . 1/23/2012 There are many elements I like about this, but I have to say that I really respect that you included how Dominika fits into all of this. You offered more characterization and insight into her and how she reacts to this particular situation than the actual canon ever did. And at no point does it feel out of place. It accentuates House's sadness, and I liked reading those sections. I also think you did an incredibly job at capturing the mix of emotions both House and Cuddy presumably felt after their break up - especially with Cuddy since we never really got any sort of glimpse at her feelings. Every word from her point of view felt real and true to her character, and it was so sad to read. You should definitely think about writing more angst, because you are great at it. Thank you for sharing this. :) |
hisbrainisonfire chapter 1 . 6/10/2011 I am a little late on the uptake of this, but I had to say that I love it. It broke my heart. Poor Huddy. |
Iane Casey chapter 1 . 4/28/2011 Heyyy, love! :D M'kay... This was so beautifully written! So poignant and bittersweet that it ripped my heart out, but the small ray of hope at the end that you added made it so much more beautiful! It's tragic, raw, beautiful and painful all at the same time, yes, but alas, that's how House and Cuddy are, right? I loved how you pushed them into a situation like this! If I didn't know the show's writers/producers, I'd say they could have pulled off something like this! But no, sadly. Anyway, great work! :D No worries about the rev. :) I always make it a point to review beautiful fanfics. :) I do hope you at least write a sequel to this, and that this isn't your last fic! :P A sequel wherein House is divorced! *just an idea* xD Awesome job with the writing and the emotions! ~Iane |
IHeartHouseCuddy chapter 1 . 4/20/2011 I loved it! It was so bittersweet and complicated and raw and emotional, just like the true essence of the couple. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2011 Sometimes I think they are inseparable because they are so perfect together... I'm so sad about huddy...so sad... But your story is pretty and show how big is thrir love each other... Thanks! (And, please, sorry for my bad English.) |
Winnywriter chapter 1 . 4/20/2011 Tragically beautiful? Beautifully tragic? I don't know, but it was a great read and made my heart ache. |
Grace gold chapter 1 . 4/20/2011 :'( :'( it... It... Was... :'( beau...beaut... Beautiful. :PPP lol. Seriously though it was beautiful, amazing. Wow! Looooooooooooooooooooooved it ;) |
Ironic Sauce chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 This is just so heartbreakingly amazing. Very nice job :) |
secretsunion chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 OMG. I so love it. Well done hun. You know, I totally can see they like this on the show. Together but not together, because everybody knows they are meant to be togheter in their own screw up way. |
jehabib1 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 this was amazingly written... |
Irene3691 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 Touching. I liked it very much :-) |
Penelope S Cartwright chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 I have to say I'm incredibly touched you dedicated the story to the LA Gang and myself. Just getting the chance to read this before most people, has been a guilty pleasure. Now on to the review. The flow of your story is what I love the most along with the change in perspective. It shows how heartbroken both of them are without being convoluted and too angsty. The time you took on this fic shows with how incredibly well-written it is and it is a pleasure the House section of is seeing rarely these days. The fact you added in Dominika as another lost soul of this drama really shows how she can be a great plot device and character [if the show writer's get their heads out of their arses]. Beautifully written, great story and dialog. Everyone should read this. |
jl1820 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 That was perfectly bittersweet. I can't recall if I've reviewed your stories in the past, but I always really enjoy them. They're some of the best. |