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Even though it was fast paced at the end, I really enjoyed this. :)

And, interesting perspective about Danny's character as well. I always had a feeling he would be scared to be a dad as well or scared that he would also become a drunk like Jack.

I don't usually like one shots, but this was done perfectly.

u had me going until the last 5 words, u killed it.

Very lovely! You have such a way with words. It absolutely blows me away!

This story was well-composed and extremely interesting to read. I loved how you described Danny's emotions. This story was very fast-paced and I hope you decided to continue writing. Thank you for composing this and sending it our way. Great job and keep on writing!