What a great story. I really loved it. Nice to read someting a little out of the norm

Love this! Such an incredible story.

Read all three of your fics in this universe and enjoyed them all immensely. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.

awwww

I love the double perspective you offered through this and Dangerous Assumption. It's interesting to get into their heads and see that they're thinking and reacting to completely different things. Is there a reason why this is written in first person and Dangerous Assumption in third. Perhaps, Sherlock is just distant and maybe he thinks of himself in the third. Regardless, amazing fic.

Love it ! So good

Poor John so confused... I wonder what is Sherlock thinking about it all...

It really didn't come out right...but it was so funny! And Jim really didn't understand Sherlock and what could truly motivate him... I can t wait to see what more is going to happen:-)

I enjoyed reading this piece but some of your sentences were a bit odd. It wasn't that they didn't make sense—more like the way you structured them prevented them from flowing.
I liked how you had John express his feelings towards Sherlock but in a way that could be interpreted as romantic. It seems like such a John thing to do.
By the way, did you mean to write 'Sherlock' as 'Sher' in one of the later chapters? I couldn't help but focus on that while reading.

"It means I'll talk to him three hours from now, minus the number of minutes of today's date." - "Sure, well, of course, it would be. That's how Harry and I set our coffee meet-ups, too."
Perfect lines to read when in a bad mood.

I so love this story. Really fabulous writing and I am so excited to read more of your work.

Love.

This was a brilliant story. I enjoyed reading it. The pace was perfect and of course Sherlock would figure it out eventually.

Thank you for this fanfic!
I like it!
Sherlock and John are so cute together... 3

I go to see Dangerous Assumptions right now!

Awesome! I loved the ending :)