This is such a beautifully written story with great characterizations. Thank you for writing and sharing it

Everything about this has been wonderful. Your writing is consistent and detailed and I can see it all happening as I read. I may never get a season 3, but I can try better to get by when there are fics like this out there, finished or no.

I see someone already mentioned that you swapped several times between their daughter's names.

Loved the insight you had into both characters and their personalities! They both really shine in this fic and I'm looking forwarding to reading the next chapter!

I love this story. Really wish there was more.

Like your story. Wish there was one more chapter showing Lloyd & Lily finally meeting.

This is a great fic. You have an excellent knack for narrative and delving into what motivates the characters; I especially appreciated Llody's vulnerability. Thanks for staying with this and giving us a "complete" story.

Omg soooo sweet!I love this!Great!Fix!

next episode please! :)

Awesome! I have been wanting a great Jules/Lloyd fic. I can't wait for more. I really hope you stick with this.

please update soon :)

Sooo happy for the new chapter

I'm glad to see this update. There really isn't enogh Breakout Kings fic and to have it be good fic is fantastic.

Wow this a good story but y does it feel like there's 1 more chapter to come? Hope to see if there's more of this story

I am a huge fan of the show. It was sad to see it become another cancelled show. This chapter had a realistic feel to it; it was well written and emotionally driven. Keep up the good work.

Great story i hope you continue!