videl smirking at her boyfriend gohan don't worry your penis is where it belongs in my pussy

videl hissing saying shouting telling yelling to the author wtf wth is wrong with you videl hissing shouting yelling to sayianman get fuck back here right now no flying or running from me i know that you will never try to control me i was scared of losing you ok i love you so much son gohan

videl saying to gohan you are going to get a tattoo of videl do not touch Angela and drain your seed into my pussy with your penis

U rule. U SHUD WRITE MORE lemons try sakura and sasuke ROCK ON

Wouah Hot.

I will never stop liking reading this fanfic from time to time, again and again, because I swear to god it's so damn hot! :D Good job! As always!

Wow ! What a lovely romantic fic ! I really enjoyed reading it .In my opinion you should had included the full lemon ,but other than that it was REALLY GOOD .Could you please write anothe fic about Gohan and Videl and ,if you do, make it one chapter long like this one and include all lemon and describe it really good so that your readers get a great image of the lemon ,okay ? BTW YOU ROCK !

This was...soo hot! You dirty dirty author you! Keep up the good work!

This was quite erotic at the end. Really invigorating and interesting. I was kinda expecting a part where Yamcha was watching through the camera's having fun by himself. ;)

Great storyline and plot

9/10

:3

So so SO hot!

Please write a history of Gohan and Lime.

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I LOVED this story, and would love to read the full version if you linked me. And what song did you use may I ask?

Good fic, love the ending.

Hope to read the full version though!

X Tanja

Panting hot, lustful breaths? Well you sure sound like you could give the right girl a good time. Lol wink wink XD Awesome story :)

pure hotness. i read the unedited version o one of the other sites...