This was so sweet! thanks for sharing :)

I just read your authors note... was your daughters name inspired by your love of twilight? if so that is sooooooooo cute 3 3 3

What no love for Edward Bella?

The unfortunate thing with Angela’s death is it leaves more unanswered questions and no relief in sight. *sigh*

Growing pains are hard but at least Edward is willing to admit he’s wrong and ask advice and take it. Well done. I just hope Savannah doesn’t weaponize calling him ‘Edward’ when she’s mad at him because I think he’s earning Dad quite well. Jeremy seems nice but no boy is good enough to grope your daughter as my dad use to say ‘dems da rules’. :-p so are the gossipy Cullen women going to meddle more? Survey says...

I have a questions too. Why did the Webber’s say that about Edward and why couldn’t they adopt Savannah? Why would they want to when they could have raised her in the first place? Anyway, good chappy.

Honestly, I’m reading this story because it’s an E/B story first so that’s my expectation. However, these two can’t have the usual faster pace courtship because of a few important things. I mean Esme was there at the beginning so her rush/pushing is annoyingly meddlesome. This is just Edwards baggage. His adult life was built on a lie. He lost time with his daughter and family. Edward had a daughter appear that he thought was dead and is now 16, divorced his wife, fought for his daughter while a social worker thought he was a rapist, got custody, sold a house, accepted a job in a place he didn’t even want to visit let alone live, resigned from a prestigious job, sold a house, moved across country, has a hormonal teenage boy sniffing around his new daughter, bought a new house, started a new job with a cranky brunette, and trying to be a dad. While I want them together it’s not realistic with Bella’s deep seated issues about Edward’s career choice even though he’s amazing at it. Esme should mind her own business on this one. Organic is best.

A cool Rosalie that rarely happens. Another good step for Savannah and Edward’s father/daughter relationship. Yay! Yeah Bella whiplash indeed sweetheart.

While Edward has been attracted to Bella from the start he also knows how closely they have to work together and how she’s so involved with his family. So her attitude while makes since to her is wildly unfair. I am glad Edward’ just spun her some home truths because she needed to hear them. Perhaps she will now evolve. I also love what he’s carving out with savannah. Cheers!

Okay not cool. How could his family share his personal story like gossip to a woman who he doesn’t know, invite her to dinner and she has been nothing but rude. But then not clue him in to her issues. Not cool Cullens. Especially Rosalie or at least Esme you know she knows. I get it Bella’s been hurt but someone please clue in Edward.

Did Bella lose a baby at some point? Obviously she has a sad story but my question is why invite her to Edward’s welcome home party if she doesn’t warm up to people. Shouldn’t it have been just family? Is Charlie dead is she alone? Hmm...

Alice gave some fantastic advice. I think Edward’s boss George is going to make his choice easier. Besides savannah should get to know her entire family. I hope we deal with ALL the Webber’s before this is done.

So the Webber’s paint young Edward as a rapist. Jesus! I mean they weren’t doing what Jesus would do that’s for sure preacher and wife. I would find them and sick Jasper on them. What a mess. So Bella is a doula? Uh. If Rose is high risk she’ll need more than Bella.

Bella is either a widow or has a loser ex and she is a high risk pregnancy? Anyway Shelly may want to protect Savannah but she was awfully unprofessional. I know that job is stressful but damn!

Well I think Edward needs a support system and to be away from crazy Jane so he needs to get over it and go back to Forks. He’ll meet Bella there. Maybe she’s married to an asshole who she dumped. Regardless, love will find a way. Fingers crossed. All in all Edward needs to experience the baby process from beginning to end.
:-p