Still chuckling over the boy-toy comment. "The woman moved with the sinister grace of a viper." - This is the best description I've read anywhere about Petrice.

"And he'd betrayed the one person who had managed to make a lie out of a lifetime." The way you phrase things is impressive. I really like the way you write.

"And then it happened." - Oh wow. Just wow. *sigh*

amazing story.

Beautiful ending. Fenris finally accepted her for what she is. I really thought you were going to kill her off for a second there. This was a good read the whole way through, thanks!

Hmmmmm...sad. Poor Cassidy.

Lol. I love Fenris' dry humor, it has made me laugh every time I hear it. You simply add to the continuation of that laughter. Thank you and good job!

Poor Fenris. Dealing with the Varric shenanigans. And nice to see Aveline getting some much needed attention. Poor Anders and Merril, left to brighten up their free time with spirit possession and blood magic :P.

Varric is ALWAYS right. I was hoping to see more of the spirit, but this was good too. Anything involving killing Patrice satisfies me :)

Sorry, the last sentence made me snort unashamedly. Oh Leandra and oh Fenris. Oh sash. XD Love that detail!

This is already amazing! The way you write is so natural and just completely 'fits' with what I imagine DA II would be in it's narrative form. Beautiful! And I especially love the idea of Cassidy, a mage, being possessed by a spirit like Justice. You're description of the physical strain and symptoms of the possession are also really interesting, not to mention eloquently described and wonderfully written! Great work! :D

Liked the new take on the apology scene for the fade. I wish it would have been different if you had romanced him like it is here. Loving the angst. Keep it coming.

PWEEEEAAASSSEEEEE write more soon.

I'm dying right now; the story's amazing.

The tension in this is too good. So much delicious angst, and I really like the idea of having Hawke possessed by a spirit and I really like how you handled how Courage and Justice reacted to each other, the visions she had were chilling.

I especially like this story because Hawke's first name is my name in real life. So it's kinda cool to read a story with my name in it :)

Good work, can't wait to see what happens!

Short and sweet. Excellent chapter. The dream was particularly vivid and beautiful.

And yay, I like being acknowledged. :)

Your story really does deserve more reviews than just mine though.