Nice story, very in character

Nice story

That was really really good, i loved it :)

Oh honey, I completely understand. I write these notes to my readers much more often than I should. Take your time.

xo, Chantal

I'm just glad you didn't delete this note before I got a chance to read it...author's notes chapters tend to get removed before I see them since I'm so slow in checking for alerts Dx

And if I review, that means that when you post the actual chapter 6, I won't be able to review it. Oh, crums. But I want to help so I'm doing it

Well, I'm pretty interested in the Brad in your story, mostly exactly what he feels for Sam and how strong they are. Maybe you could give us a little more inlook on how he fell for her? He is pretty important to the story.

Or, you could go down the dangerous road and throw Freddie and Sam into some life-threatening situation, similar to what Dan did to Carly and Sam in 'iQuit iCarly'. Because it seems that the friendship those two had is pretty much ruined at this point, and they need to fix that first, you know? They hvae a much stronger friendship than most notice, and I don't think it should be ignored.

Hope my review helped! Good luck with finals and any future writting!

~ TwisterKirby

awesome fanfic think about cheese dont stop

Can't wait for more congrats on the a good luck on finals yuck more carly n sam scenes would be awesome! And some spencer:}

If i were you, i would make the next chapter about Brad telling Freddie what happened, and that he Liked Sam and kissed her, but she just ran off. Freddie trys to confront Sam then... Cliff hanger. lolz thats what i would do! Love your story plz continue.

Ditto!

This is my procrastination station.

AP Exams in 2 days.

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But as for ideas, hmm... my brain is running on caffeine, glitter and duct tape right now, so my ideas may not be the best, but I would think of something along the lines of the scene opening up with Brad and Freddie waiting on a bench outside of Principal Franklin's office; with tension heavy and general awkward proceedings. Brad would be hesitantly trying to ask through his ice pack what was running through Freddie's mind when he punched him...do with that what you will, if you want. And for a cliffy, when Brad asks Freddie if he likes Sam-Principal Franklin comes storming down the hall, steaming mad! No violence in HIS school! :P

There's my idea, use it, lose it, borrow tidbits from it...whatever your brain desires. If you don't use it, I won't mind, maybe it will lead you to another idea, you know, get the creative juices flowing (Peace, man) XD.

Good luck with your finals!

I know you'll update as soon as you can, no worries.

~Virgoleo23

hmmm let's see, what do i want for this story?

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SAM AND FREDDY TALKING EVERYTHING OUT GAAAHHH. :P

and lots of seddie fluff please. :)

they could talk it out at the groovy smoothie maybe? at a table in the back or something?

Hey love the story!
Suggestion; Freddie should still be upset and runs across the street or something and he gets hit, ending up in the hospital (Hurt bad, but not too bad).

Hopefully that gives you some sort of idea
:)

Alright look, don't stress.

Chapter 6:

Freddie walked up to Carly and Sam.

"Hi," he said.

"Hi," Carly replied.

"GTFO, bitch," he hit her in the face and she walked out of the room to get ice cream.

"Yo, Sammeh," he said, winking like the tune we all know he is.

"Hey Freddie, you're lookin' fine today."

"I know."

They had sex. The end.

BAM writers block over.

... No but seriously. Go write the next chapter immediately or my Seddie obsessed heart will break.

Hmmm, I think I like OOC!Freddie. It's different, interesting. Can't wait for more, my dear :)

xo, Chantal

This is amazing! I absolutely love it. Please please PLEASE update soon. :D

Kind of a strange chapter, with the praying, and the dramatics and all. I'm unsure of why Freddie punching Brad is such a tradegy, but I'm looking forward to reading more.