I found it as an interesting story. Although, i felt everything going too fast, I enjoyed your work. Well done!

I dislike tea, your attitude with yugi was disgusting at first and then you come to make friends after it was discovered that hedge and mokuba were cousins of yugi

I loved

Meant that comment to be on chapter 40

You probably won’t read this, but this is an amazing story. I hope that if you do read this, you add an epilogue. It’s not important, but a story like this would work well with a epilogue.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Very good story, I haven't read a story line that in a while

Jana

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

I'm lucky to only have found this after it was completed, huh?

To chapter 6... Funny how Bakura's being obnoxious and caring!

I have to say, beyond brilliant!
What's kind of weird is, one of my close friends who is a lot like a brother to me was in an accident when he was 5 that killed his parents. He had amnesia and did not remember his parents at all. To this day, he still doesn't remember them and he's 17 now.

congratulations. This is the first yugioh fic I've ever fav'ed that didn't have explicit puzzleshipping when the muuto's were featured. you are really good with the plot development but you should work on making your chapters longer and more detailed. Other then that, no complaints!

I gotta admit, I really thought this story was gonna be abandoned. But...I was wrong. I doubted you before but now you've proven to me that you finished this story despite the obstacles that weighed you down. I'm so proud of you.

appearance the next chapters in the history

please soon

please