How long does it take for you to write ‘hospital wing’ instead of ‘HW’. Story’s really good, I like it.

You are a disgusting human being whom I hope suffers greatly for writing this.

I’m strughling to continue reading. I hate pusdy harry. I want to kick his fucking teeth in.

It's a shame you didn't continue with this, I would have loved to have read more.

Is the story over?

this story was Updated: May 1, 2016
It is now August 4, 2019

Is this story DEAD? Inquiring minds ( I ) want to know!

Personally, I hope Hermione does to him what she did to malfoy. Only instead of punching him in the face, give him a solid kick to the family jewels. Then hex them good and properly.

Love the story and will you be updating Hannah Marie what!

I love your writing so much and this story is amazing! I know it’s been years since this was last updated, but I hope you decide to keep writing in the (hopefully near) future.

Yeah. Dropping this. It was a nice idea, but horribly executed, then the mistakes I’ve already mentioned just made it near torture.

This is now also painfully inconsistent. You made it out like he was ‘beaten, but not broken’ in order to justify Daphne’s intrigue, but he is very clearly broken. He fully believes he deserves his beatings. How in your mind is that NOT broken?

The forgetting names is ridiculous at this point. I have to actually sit there trying to find out WHERE names were left out since the sentences weren’t legible, then I have to figure out WHO it was you left out. How in the bloody hell do you have perfect sentences with only the names missing?

You keep forgetting to add names to certain parts.. like how the side room was next tos office, or howushered Nym to Minerva’s office..

I can't lie to you ... these time jumps are getting infuriating! Going from 11 to 9 to 1030 back to 11 is getting ridiculous! If you could keep those to a minimum, that would be great!

such a good story! please update!