Kaname's desires to seeing his cum flow out of Zero omg hahaha

This sucks i hate storys like this that makes zero do weak

I like

Tienes que seguirla esta genial si solo le puaieras mas romance o sea en el sexo son geniales pero en el cariño recien se forma especialmente Zero que aun no siente mas que lujuria y pasion hacia Kaname cosa que es comprensible la verdad jaja

You should make it that someone else comes into the picture and that Kaname gets jealous.
-just a thought.

Kirykuran a romance that that only yaoi fan girls love

Wow. I really love this story. Will it be continued still?

so cute!

Much love!

What the fuck is this? You make zero sound like a weak little bitch. Fuck you. You don't know the first thing about writing a good fanfic. This is complete trash. I honestly have a headache aftet spending 10 minutes of my presious time reading this crap. Congradulations, you are officially the worst author yet.

Well you succeeded in making a strong brave man into someone who can only talk big and do nothing, great job -_- zero is one of my favorite characters so when an author makes him a big talking wussy it kinda annoys me. so sorry but this is definitely not a fav, not even close. And to think it had such great potential when I first started reading:(

Hahahah... yummy... you completely surprised me when kaname-san did 'that'...

You should keep going with this one. It seems like it should have more... Its really good! :)

This was really awesome;p I kinds hope there's another chapter;p this would actually make a really good plot line for a longer story;p

i love it