I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!

8 years later
where is the bloody update

HAHaha?

This might be an overused question but when are posting the new chapter. It’s a few hear since you posted this one and I love this story line you have here.

How disappointing, another decent pokemon fic giving up on by some who got lazy and doesn't care anymore.

Thr last part made me laugh. Poor Ho-oh.

I love the story so far, and I can't wait for some updates! Anyways, I know it's for the the plot, but if Ash is supposedly smart than he was in the anime, don't you think that he should have realized that returning his Pokemon to their balls would have been the best choice. Immediately after he was alerted to the Spearow and started running, he should have returned both. I know that Pikachu isn't a fan of his poke ball, at all, but safety should come first before comfort. And by returning his Pokemon to their balls, they wouldn't have gotten hurt (especially Seardra), and Ash would have been able to travel much faster without being impeded by the weight of traveling with two Pokemon. I get running with Pikachu isn't that big of a deal, as he is a small Pokemon and doesn't weigh much, but Seadra would cause a problem, as she is nearly 4' tall and over 50lbs. Running, or even cycling, with something like that slowing you down, is not as easy as doing so unhindered by such an object. Also, and this part is of a lot less importance, but I don't think a Pokemon as big as Seadra would be able to fit in the front basket of a bicycle. It'd be like trying to have a kid, someone about the size of Max, try to sit in there. Maybe if Seadra was only a Horsea, as she'd be smaller and much lighter, but as she is, it's a no go. Oh, and I don't really remember the gender of Ash's Seadra, just female is the default gender that comes to mind.

Forgot to say this in my review of chapter 3, but Ash beating Prof. Oak has officially marked him as having beaten a former champion. At least, if you're taking certain aspects from the Pokémon manga universe, as Prof. Oak is a former champion in it. Thus, Ash beating Oak means he's beat a former champion of Kanto.

I hate how the anime and some other media always talk about how electric attacks don't work on rock types, as if they are immune or even resistant to them. Electric attacks are neutral towards rock types, not "not very effective" and definitely not ineffective either. It's electric vs ground that is the immunity, yet the anime and various other media (various FanFiction stories) have completely skewered this.
Also, is the Seadra/Ash dynamic/relationship going to be the same, or at least the equivalent of that of Charizard/Ash from the anime? That'd be cool, I guess.

I love the little bit at the end about Ho-Oh. As if him seeing Ho-Oh on the first day of his journey wasn't just happenstance, but was actually a deliberate plan made by the Legendaries; maybe by Ho-Oh, or maybe even by Arceus him(her/it)self.

Heh, those Pokemon league officials ruined magnificent exhibitionist plan of Ho-oh. lol

like the story, please continue

DorkaliciousGeekGirl

Please please PLEASE tell me you're going to continue this story. It's really good and it's killing me that you haven't updated since FREAKIN' 2011!

I always thought about this! That ash should have studied/helped professor oak before his journey

And then Ho-Oh has to fly all the way back home again. Cough.

*Little brat, making me wait outside his house until I could fly over him, I should squash him a little to teach him a lesson*